Seekers Writing Prompt - A Failed Trick

To become a magician is one of my dreams. I got astonished for the first time by a warlock's performance, he was a man dressed in white, wore hat and a single eye glass on right. He just stood there on the stage, talked about something nonsense, I didn’t even think it was a joke. One by one, some pigeons came to him, he put them on his body while he was talking, first on his shoulder, head, hands and so on until all his body covered by the countless doves. Then, in a finger snapping, all the birds flied together and the magician was no more to be seen anywhere on the stage.  

I couldn’t hide my amazement. That was very cool. I knew he used a trick but that was a way too impressive. If only I could find out his trick was, I must be able to perform. Later, I had been searching of the tricks. One day I found a simple trick to perform in front of my audiences, my dad and little bro, the most loyal men in this world.

In the dining room we gathered. I cleaned up stuffs and foods on dining table and left it only covered by tablecloth. They were sitting in front of me with bored smiling face I read it as “The hell will you doing here, you waste my time anyway.”

“Ladies and gentlemen, let me present to you a great magic trick you ever see” I opened the show.

“Go ahead whatever ya do’in, Conjurer!” said my bro not even hide his sarcasm resulted a burst of laught my dad seemed to hold it I didn’t know since when.  I threw him a stare ‘why you so mean, papa?!’ and he suddenly stopped, realized his mistake.

“Alright, let me start”I showed them a coin “I will make this disappear.”

I put it on the table and took a translucent glass, covered the coin by it.

“You still can see the coin, through the glass. So...” I took a sheet of an old newspaper and covered the outer glass by it. I pressed the paper so it looked like the glass’s form.  “Now you can’t see the coin.”

I took the covered glass off and on to make sure I wasn’t tricked them and the coin still there.

“Well, after this the coin will disappear” I moved my hand like a clairevoyant and chanted a spell, I could see my dad and bro payed more attention now.

“Abrakadava!” I took off the glass, boo! The coin still there and I got frustated.

“Eeeeh, how could this coin still there??! What’s wrong??” I murmured.

My audience’s reaction just a ‘meh’.

“Okay, I will repeate again, this time will work. Papa! Watch this!” I said angrily for seeing him averted his head into turned on tv.

I repeated the exact same trick, failed again. My bro yawned and I got more frustated. The third time I did the trick, instead took off the glass from coin, I smacked the covered glass, it startled my dad and bro that the glass was no more there, I just smacked the paper. For seeing them got surprised, I squeezed the paper with a lot of confidence and threw it to garbage near me.

My audiences clapped their hands, gave me an applause. I stood up to bow but I forgot there was a glass on my lap, it slide away from my lap and fell on the floor caused a noise of cracking. There was a silent before storm. My face turned red, my dad and my bro ran out of words when we all heard a scream of mum “WHO’S BREAKING GLASS??”

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  • Hello Sophia :D 

    Thanks for dropping by. 

    I am sorry for late response because i just notice your comment now. 

    Again, thank for your appreciation

  • Hehehe, Thank you very much for your kind words, Elen :D those made me blushing xD 

    Little magician, sound too sweet, hehe.. great witch? no no, that's sound evil :D 

    i prefer first one. 

    Have a wonderful day 

  • Hahaha, Peppo you little magician! :D Now i understand why you have this profile pic. :D Keep on trying and one day you will become a great magician. Or a great witch, haha :D :D Funny story, i read it with much interest. :)

  • Hi Icha,
    Actually yes, this is based on true story but I succeeded and didn't break the glass, lol xD
    I wish I could be a magician, wish me the best of luck, hehe...
    Thanks for drop by and comment here ;)
  • Hi Peppo,

    I want to ask you.Is it the true story? :). If yes, I think you can study it furthermore. As we know, Indonesia has few woman magician. You will have good carrer besides you can earn money from that hihi..

  • That's a huge amount of support. 

    how kind of you, Mohammad :D

  • See, it is just the first paragraph. Correct that and delete this comment. In MS word, when you have a green line under your sentence, it means the sentence has grammatical error, and the red line means spelling error. Actually I don't have time to do the rest. You must do it yourself, I'm sure you CAN  :)

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    Became (To become) (or becoming) a magician is one of my dream(s). I got astonished for the first time by a warlock (magician)('s) perform (performance), he was a man dressed in white, wore hat and a single eye glass on right. He just stood there on the stage, talked aboutno sense (something nonsense), I didn’t even think it was a joke. One by one a pigeon (some pigeons) came to him, he put it (them) on his body while he was talking, first on his shoulder, head, hands and so on until all his body covered by (the) countless doves. Then, in a snapping fingers (finger snapping), all the birds flied together and the magician was no more to be seen anywhere on the stage.

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    have a nice time

  • Thank you, Seeker. 

    I hope I can take all your writing prompts

  • Hi Mohammad, 

    first, thanks for dropping by 

    second, i will try to rewrite, in case i can't, i'll let it like that anyway. 

    third, thanks for remind me about the right eye, i am not sure though which eye is true, lol xD 

    forth, i did correct it five times using Mc Word and it said no more gramatical error. if you find any,please show me so i can fix it. 

    Cheers

  • So cool, thanks for sharing. 

    But there are some points from my view, first of all, I think it is better to rewrite the paragraph before last paragraph (started with "I repeated the ..."), because the most important point of your blog (the trick) is mentioned in that paragraph, and it must and can be written better.

    According to the man's pic, the single eye glass is put on his right eye not left. BTW, the text has some grammatical and spelling errors, so I recommend you to copy-paste that in the Microsoft Word software and correct them.

    Cheers

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