Scars in the soul
A smiling face,
but eyes without shine.
You don't see it,
sudden you are gone away.
You're gone away,
taking my smiling eyes
and even it colors.
Leaving only tears and pain.
My bleeding soul
has gotten deep scars.
Pain doesn't want to go
and crying is my heart.
But strong will
will endure the fate.
Hope will grow again.
Hope deep in my heart.
Scars will fade,
tears will dry out
and soul will heal
and my eyes shine again.
Rose Iris
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No Rose.
I just gave the 'finishing touches' major work and the basic idea is yours. So please let it be 'Under the ROSE"!
Thanks so much Mishaikh, you made my poem better than I have written it. I think I should publish it here on this site under our both name.
Nice and touchy.
Just a suggestion:
A smiling face,
with faded eyes
You didn't see it
and gone away.
You're gone away,
snatching my smiling eyes
and even their colors.
Leaving pain and tears behind.
My bleeding soul
has gotten deep scars.
Pain doesn't want to go
and crying is my heart.
But strong will
will endure the fate.
Hope will grow again
deep in my heart.
Scars will fade,
tears will dry out
soul will heal
and my eyes will shine again.
Ikh liebee das licht. I like the light, Rose. You mean, we have to suffer and then we find happiness. I hope to be one of your friends.
exactly noticed, DEVIL!!!
If there will be no pain no one seek for happines nice blog
Thanks for your comments. Yes, we should never give up, Serene.
and Dara Gino, you asked me why I remind you of pain? If were going through pain, then we appreciate happiness much more. And although we have sometimes to go through bad times ... at the end of a dark tunnel we always can be sure to see the light again.
Dear Rose! Nice poem. We should never give up hope,hope is life. New hope brings happiness into your life.
Guten nachmitaj Rose. Why do you remind us of pain? the last four lines were giving some hope to escape from the suffering and pain. I like ( the scar will fade/ tears will dry out ). Thanks for sharing Rose.