Relations...
Getting deep into those-
Makes me feel the hollowness.
Kept a light for those;
But in vain.
More stumpy blackness surrounded.
About to hold those hands;
Soon the unfathomable depth-
Held me tightly.
Subtle voice made my solace.
Looked around;
And found the self there.
A blaze leads my way.
Somebody said " it's your soul";
But i doubted...
Comments
Very nice poem! I advise to post in the EC's Creative Writing forum (I'm a mod there). I started a monthly contest "Inspirational Post of the Moth". It could be chosen in the future.
http://www.englishclub.com/esl-forums/viewforum.php?f=129