Paradise

Hello my dear EC friends (All members in EC)

Please read this writing because it is written for all of you.

 

In God We Trust

 

 

 

PARADISE

    We lived in the Paradise at first, after eating that forbidden fruit we were deported…

Humans love each other, but in the middle there is one who doesn't like to see their love. He is the person who cheated humans to eat that forbidden fruit, he is trying so hard to create evil among people.

 

    We ate that fruit, and he was the happiest person whole the world. He was seeing us and smiling…

Humans' nature is full of beauties. They aren't forgetful but they are able to forgive easily.

Earth isn't our main place.

We are able to let others be born again and then all of us can come back to our main place, Paradise.

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  • Thanks dear ACOR for reading it.

    They aren't forgetful but they are able to forgive easily...

    You are right, all this blog is written to say that line.

    Thanks for your nice words.

    It's very kind of you.

  • Hello Robbie

    Thanks for your comment :)

  • God is so wise! He created faith, so that we can be more close to Him. He gave us wisdom to discover things on our own. Most of all, He let us feel Forgiveness so we'll repent and move on. I think, following His words serve as guidance in our everyday lives, which later leads us in His paradise. Thanks for sharing this thoughts. God bless my friend! : )

  • Anele

    Well done, dear!

    Your two first lines is a great idea.

    "We are all slaves to the Father of All Evils"

    What does it mean?

    Is it a literary compound?

    Or it means some special thing?

    As I'm seeing you are using capital letters for "Father", "All" and "Evils" in their first letters.

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    SHIFNA

    How nice your name is!

    Yes, it is the story of Adam and Eve.

    And your words are nicer.

    Thanks, it is the best thing for finding the right way certainly.

    And the most important thoing is performing them in our life.

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    Dewan

    Thanks for your comment.

    We must do it certainly.

    We lived in Paradise too, deporting from that place is also our fault.

    We should try to correct it all together.

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