Writing a poem, story, essay, research or any kind of writings are not my strength. I admit that.
I always admire all the bloggers here. I'm learning to you by reading all your writings. So proud!
In my part, I explore myself learning English thru music.Since, my one of my greatest passion is singing. In this way I search the meanings, language and feature of the lyric of some pop, R n B song, and other genre.
I decided to make my own composition. This is easy for me to do 'cuz it reflects my personality and greatly affect my mind. Here it is, my other way of writing :) Composing a song.
Wanna Be Somebody
I
Every time I wake up
Still dreams running to my mind
Sometimes I get upset, need to reset
I know I'm weak, but I don't freak
'Cuz I'm in control of how I live
II
Do I have to get rid
This thing "come what may"
Though totally worn out
I must think, Life is a journey
I'm screaming and say WHOHOOO...what a ride!
I have to abide.
CHORUS
Hear me out, Hear me out
Gotta be real
I know I can deal
Tell me what am I supposed to do
To make this dream come true
Turn the trick, wanna be somebody someday
III
Don't know where to go
I'm loosin' my path
Don't know where to turn
Seems road is closing off
Need somebody to hear me,keep my voice within
Learn to hold on and keep believing
Repeat Chorus
Bridge
Tell me How
Tell me When
Bring it on
Don't want to torn
I know it's not useless
I can be at my best!
P.S. If there is something that you want to share for me to alter some lyrics.
You could say so. I appreciate that.
What do you think, is it good or bad, or something is lacking?
Comments
Hello Ms. Anele!
About the tune, my friend is working on it. I can't play guitar so I decided to pass it with her.
Yeah, I want it like AVRIL LAVIGNE style of music , Pop Rock.
Thank you so much for dropping by.
MJ :)
OHHH, my lovely JJ, it's so nice of you..I'm also a big fan of you and I really believe you are already a singer. You are very great at singing and have a great talent and nice voice. And, I hope everything be the way you long for. I know you as a great singer. The lyrics is awesome. It's very professional. It was so professional that I thought you shared it here. wow! I didn't know you also write poems. I already told you. You are a real awesome singer and song-writer. Wow! GREAT JOB!
Thanks a lot once again for your kind words about me.
Here's the link of my own workshop in KARAOKE GROUP:
http://my.englishclub.com/group/karaoke/forum/topics/this-is-me-mil...
If you want to listen and join this group, too, you are very much welcome!
Hi Nafis!
Actually this is a music lyric. I composed it, as you can see, it resembles how eagerly want to be on a FAME but it is only in my dreams. "Somebody" means to be known thru my voice,my passion in singing. Ambitious,right?
It is an honor that you comment on my blog. As I told you, You are one of the best writer here.I'm one of your fan.
Night to you. Mwah!