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My Dragon

Posted by Mr_Night on January 14, 2011

 

 

Title: My Dragon

 

Every time I close my eyes I see you, my dragon

You are a myth, but you came from no where

You lived inside me

You have killed all my doubts

My actions became yours

When I run I feel as if I'm flying like you

When I stand I feel as if I'm tall as you

 

My heart is the source of flames,

Like the one in your throat

Swords of humans can't cut me

Fear, I see it in their eyes

Confidence is now my language

In your strength I'm strong

Together lets ignite the world

And bring light to the heavy darkness

 

 

 

 

 


 
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  • Sharifa Bahri (SkoonAlBahr) January 19, 2011 14:21

    WOW. You modify your thoughts clearly. I think your poem has more secrets are still hidden. I'll try to figure out some ! :)

    Thanks for giving me the green light ;)

     

    My regard

    Skoon ...

  • Mr_Night January 19, 2011 10:33

    Dear  sister, Skoon,

    I'm very happy to hear that from you. I appreciate and value your comment. As for the meaning, well, if you know who is that dragon, then you will know the whole poem. Then, who is that dragon? I will tell you, That dragon is " My high spirit " Or lets say " My positive awaken soul " weird isn't it?

    Well, I used the dragon as an imaginary character in my poem because it is the strongest thing which is or isn't even existed in real life, it has fire, it can fly and it's skin is like a shield, more over, the dragon has no fear in side, which means, the only thing inside the dragon heart is confidence.

     

    So all that, when become inside you ( your inner self ) will result in being strong, confident and alive. Me and my high spirit which came to me in thr form of a Dragon will light ( fix, correct ) the darkness (every negative feeling and act ) which I and many people live and used to live in.

     

    About sharing my poem, I give you the green light dear :)

    I wish my words can help others and be a good start to a better life, that's my goal.

     

    Thanks dear Skoon :)

    Night

  • Sharifa Bahri (SkoonAlBahr) January 19, 2011 8:47
    Ps. I shared it with my friends in facebook with your name. I hope you don't mind. :) Thanks again.
  • Sharifa Bahri (SkoonAlBahr) January 19, 2011 8:42
    I have no word to express my impressing about your strong poem. I feel the strength from your words. Being united surly is the power to ignite the world and light each darkness. Maybe I got your hints with this poem. Each couple should work together to break obstecles and get what they want as the life is hard. Until the fear fill the life's eyes. Am I right ? :) Well This is what I got from your poem. Thanks a lot for sharing it with us. You really did it very well. Skoon ...
  • Mr_Night January 18, 2011 5:48
    Hardy, Your welcome my friend, in every body there should be a living dragon( high good spirit). Life that you can't struggel in isn't life. Regards. Night
  • Mr_Night January 18, 2011 5:44

    Dear sister, Imane,

    Thanks for all the support and the sweet words. You are a great friend and you shall see good poems in the up coming days. Regards. Night

  • Mr_Night January 18, 2011 5:41

    Hi Dear Nadiyah,

    Your reading is great, but you need to work on pronunciating some words, I will post a Vocaroo file, to show you how to do it in a better way. But over all your good :)

    I really appreciate what you did Nadiyah, and I can't tell you how happy I was when I heared your voice reading my poem. Thank you so much dear sister. Regards. your bro. Night

  • Nadiyah January 17, 2011 11:23

    Hello Mr. Night,

    I try to read your poem ... sorry if I can't read it well ... please correct my pronunciation

     

     

    thank you, very nice poem!

     

    -Nadiyah-

  • Mr_Night January 17, 2011 10:52
    Haha great, Martin, this is a great thing to me to know that you liked it. I'm really happy. Thanks a lot man.
  • Mr_Night January 17, 2011 5:47

    Hi Mayumi, I say to you " Together lets ignite the world....

                                                  And bring light to the heavy darkness "

     

    You are a great poet too, and I like your style too. I think poetry style is like the finger print which can be clear to some people like you. I'm glad that you like my poetry, what makes me feel so happy is when I know that my poetry leves a good effect on people.

    Once again, Mayumi, thaks for all the support.

    Regards. Night

     

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