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Me, you and Love

Posted by Mishaikh on February 5, 2018

Use of certain words in poetry (no rule of grammar) still gives meaning.

In this poetic lines there is the impression of a trika of ME, YOU and LOVE see how absence of one makes it in complete.  

(Idea borrowed from an Urdu poem):

Me you and love

Strange! Together but not gather.

 

When I am there you are not

When you are, I am not there

When we are there love is not.

 

This is a long story of are-aren’t and is-isn’t

If I am not there, don’t know why not there

If you are not there then being you where

 

If no love is there why we are together

It is a confusing puzzle try hard can’t solve

When together only two are there

The third one is not there.

 

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  • Mishaikh March 21, 2018 21:31
    Yes, Elf it is confusing, but for the blurred mind. Otherwise there is nothing clearer than love if one sees it with inner eyes.
  • ELF-Noor March 21, 2018 20:26

    so simple words...

    Love can never be too easy, It requires sacrifices..

    Its also confusing.

  • Mishaikh February 28, 2018 1:16

    Thanks Marshaa for appreciation.

  • Marshaa February 27, 2018 16:50

    great!!!  liked it..

  • Mishaikh February 11, 2018 14:34

    Warda biata thanks for liking my blog.

    I will try to find the Urdu version of the poem and send you.

  • Warda February 10, 2018 23:50

    Long time ago, I read somewhere that "Falling in love is easy, but staying in love takes effort." Not many people make that effort.  Love is the most disrespected emotion. 
    Thank you for sharing, Mr Mishaikh. 
    I am curious to read the poetry in Urdu. I'd request you to share it with me. :) 

  • Mishaikh February 9, 2018 12:11

    Thanks Eva.


    I do not see any fun in the expression. I have seen this fact in practical life. There are couples who are married living together but there is no love between the two. I have seen people, a person have love but the other one does not feel that way. So this is factual side of life.

  • Evangelina February 9, 2018 7:06

    Mishaikh,

    This is sad;

    “When together only two are there
    The third one is not there.”


    I hope there do not exist people on earth, who would make fun of such thing - other peoples feelings and emotions - It would really show a very less flattering side, but how can that even be surprising.

    ¸¸.•*¨*•♫♪ ... Just look at the bright side of life .... ッ

  • Mishaikh February 7, 2018 15:27

    I am grateful Saba your appreciate my attempts.

  • Mishaikh February 7, 2018 15:26

    Like I said may be some time before our Urdu Poetry is very rich. Urdu poets experimented expressing their subject in few words, like I have used here in borrowing the idea from them.  But at the same time there we see long lines of sentence in single line.

    Thanks for your appraisal.

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