Hey, look on this guy, he is cool,
He never wanted be like a fool.
He called himself as a punk,
he said things like love are just junk.

In love he would never believe,
that wasn't a goal to achieve.
No girl ever had gotten his heart,
to be tough was for him as an art,
 
Then he felt the kiss of someone.
First he thought about using a gun.
It was just his nose what she kissed,
but he felt he can never resist.

He felt how his brain was in fire
and how much his heart feels desire.
Her kiss gave his both eyes a gleam,
he thought it was only a dream.

But then as he opened his eyes,
he thought he had gotten a prize.
The prize was how she had kissed,
and he felt what he had so much missed.

Her kisses have been so explosive,
don't tell me that isn't a motive.
And now I will tell you a secret,
I don't know if you will believe it.

He changed his mind, that is cool.
No one will call him a fool.
The kiss of the fairy had made
That he never more will be afraid.

To love and to kiss is his goal,
he will find a nice girl with warm soul.
So you see, it is never to late.
Should I send to you too such a date?

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  • Hahaha, Elen .... if I knew how, I would like to send you such a date .... hahaha.

    Thanks for stopping by and  your comment on my poem.

  • Yes please, send such a date to me :) Haha :D Lovely poem dear Rose. You wrote it with your unique way, you are so good in this field and I see your story in the picture!

  • Thanks a lot Luci. nice comments like yours make my day.

  • Awesome poem! Thanx again Rose for your third blog!!! You are so creative!!
  • Hahaha, dear Risty, I am glad because it seems you like my poem. It's meaning is a little serious and also funny ... I hope it's a successful mix.

  • Hello there Rose,

    Oh my goodness! The poem really transcribes what this picture looks like, at least for you, me and few others.

    Punk's not dead. hahaha :D :D Bravo!

  • Hi Camel, nice to compare love with a cup of tea, I like your imagination of mixing both components  though I also like to drink my tea without sugar, except mint tea ... it must be drunk very sweet... maybe is it the perfect liaison ... spicy tea and sweet sugar.,,, who knows!!!

  • thanks for your comments ELF-Noor,Fr@nk

  • wow, niceeeeeeeeee...!!!

    :)

  • Thanks AG for your nice comment. I haven't though about a title, yet. But it's a good idea. A title with mention of the kiss .... what do you think about the title
    "Awake kissed"  ?????

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