Beatiful mother earth
Above you the blue sky
White clouds show peace
Green madows and fields show peaceful landscapes
Ohhhh, what a deceptive peacefulness !!!
Beautiful mother earth how much do you suffer?
Big head of stone .... the behaviour of mankind
Big head made by stone, holding from strong ropes
Old stability seems like ropes and iron bars, still support your neck
But time of indestructibility is over
Deep lines are already written like wrinkles in your face
First falling stones
Wake up mankind!!!
Don't see you how our mouth starts to eat ???
We bite piece for piece of our earth
Every piece fills our greedy stomach
We swallow and swallow
Our ears are filled with the dust of falling stones
We close our eyes because we don't want to see
Not see how we swallow the fields, madows, rivers and streets
Do we hope, what we don't see, smell and hear, does not happen?
There is also a big rocket inside of your heart
The ignition will do the rest if we don't care
Hate and prejudices rule the world
If there is a rest of seed of love
Let rise the white pigeons with seed of love in their beaks
To spread the seed everywhere
Comments
Dear Valentina, if you have the impression I feel bad about your first comment on my writing.... oh noooo .... please don't think so. I knew from the moment when I have posted my writing that It provokes very different feelings. On the first sight seems that picture very peaceful because the surrounding is quiet, there are no excitements . It's a very nice landscape. Someone could understand the picture as it is, a stony head with many houses, very funny to see it. But I WANTED to see it different because I noticed some tiny details which made me think. It would be very interesting for myself to know the intention by the artist who created that picture. Maybe I was very wrong with my interpretation of his picture.... I don't know. But exactly the difference between the peaceful impression through the used colors of that picture and my thoughts and feelings while I looked at it has made me to write my description as I did. You are right, we have different sight of the meaning of a picture and it's always interesting to know those differences.
Dear Rose, after reading your reply to Evangelina's comment, I decided to write again. I'm afraid you misunderstood my comment and, probably, somebody's else, saying 'comments are different'. Yes, they are different, but I don't see bad comments here. As for me, I expressed my feelings and thoughts and said nothing about your writing. Maybe I did wrong... However, I thought it is clear, that if you provoke my thoughts and feelings, even uneasy and alarming ones, if you excite me (or anyone), it means your writing is worthy. I don't believe you expected your piece of work to cause laughter or sweet dreams. I'm sure you've succeeded. Just after the first reading, we were so impressed that couldn't find the words. And one more thing: to my mind, your picture is one of the most difficult. You are great, Rosy:)
Sounds like alarm... A feeling of inquietude... Do you really believe a little seed of love can save this crazy edacious world? Well, let's hope... Let's sow... not waiting for white doves:)
Dear Lucy, as I told you already once, you always come up with very interesting challenges.
That seduced me again to take part in this challenge. But I think we have already found the master. It's AG because I can not imagine that someone else will write such an amazing description. First I wanted write also about the picture number 2 .... but then I have read AG's blog. His imagination of that picture is just perfect and unbeatable.
Dear AG, yes, I agree, we always have a different view of pictures.
I have seen a very peaceful mood, but as we know, peace can be a fake.
I also have noticed how crowded the stony head is and how it starts to decay.
And did you see how the street is being slipping into the mouth? It was for me as if the painter wanted warn us to eat the base of our existence.
In the middle of the crowded head you can see a hole within is a rocket. That was the reason for me to see that picture as so as I have described it.
hmmmm.. so you have seen "the behaviour of mankind " in this photo..
it can be possible.. it's impressive how differently we can look at the same thing :)
firstly thanx a lot for participating and secondly I really like the way you decided to understand this picture.. poor mother Earth gotta tolerare such bastards :D I do agree with you and we shouldn't overlook killing it!!!