You are written on the moon
not to be seen
but for me
on all the foliage
the wind only whispers
your name
engraved on sky
all the clouds with
your smile
drops and rain
my heart is not enough
to invite you
to live in it
because loving you
made earth go west
made the moon hide
in its black side
all new poems
turned to old fashion
all love books became
with no ink
If your love did
a thing to me
is to search for
Mars on my simple love
ship
to steal new words
to say it to you
Comments
Nadira,
anele is a person with great personality and deep understanding of things around her, although, she denies that, this is the path of great people.
one could not help but smile when one thinks that the object of that person's love can make him notice the moon, the sky, and the clouds in a very selfish way. And can even make the earth go west. Can books become inkless so suddenly? What a powerful LOVE!
Anele mydear , love through poetic bliss.
Hahah very nice interpretation lol sorry fa really unique presentation :)
anele,
HAPPY RETURNS.
In short, you amazed me .
Nebia,
Thank you for your nice comment and for your kind reading.
When I read it the first time, I thought that it was coming from your imagination only. But I read it more than once to come up with a conclusion that love is there for real Fa.
Not a poet mood or an escape of the real world!
You live in love, breathe it and you seem happy too.
I want to thank you for allowing us to enter your world and have a break with your thoughts.
A perfection in a world of imperfection.
We were longing your Valentine poem fa!!
As said Nadira, at last it was freed as a blessing thought.
Thanks again.
You mean she got the message from Mars woah.
No, the new Vocabularies you are looking for, by crossing your fingers.
we will keep our fingers crossed as we get new words to our vocabulary ..
You mean getting new words of your empty Vocabularies.
ohhh k
thank you for explanation
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