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Hello Hamzeh,

Thank you for the friend request and welcome to EnglishClub. One thing you can start doing to improve your English is to capitalize your name and the names all formal nouns. That is very important in English when we write.

Here is what you wrote: I am hamzeh. I'm iranian . I am a student in ferdowsi university in mashad. I would like to learn english well.

I underlined each word that needs to be capitalized and added two words in BOLD that improve your grammar. You can edit your blog and correct these as a good first step. I hope we see more blogs from you and I am sure that one by one you will add things you learn to your writing and we will see improvement. Good luck in your studies. :)

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Mr. Bob December 16, 2014 6:13

Hello Hamzeh,

Thank you for the friend request and welcome to EnglishClub. One thing you can start doing to improve your English is to capitalize your name and the names all formal nouns. That is very important in English when we write.

Here is what you wrote: I am hamzeh. I'm iranian . I am a student in ferdowsi university in mashad. I would like to learn english well.

I underlined each word that needs to be capitalized and added two words in BOLD that improve your grammar. You can edit your blog and correct these as a good first step. I hope we see more blogs from you and I am sure that one by one you will add things you learn to your writing and we will see improvement. Good luck in your studies. :)
Rajesh April 12, 2012 5:55

Hi Hamzeh,
Yasemin April 10, 2012 16:45

Welcome to English Club Hamzeh!

You are in the right place! :)

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