He was burned and melted away meanwhile she talked happily about her friend .Then asked him “ Do you know him ?He is my strength when I am weak and I am his strength when he is weak .He is a very handsome . He is so nice one . He is the light of my way ….. “
The silence prevailed between them on mobile .
Then He said”I wish if I could be your eyes to make you see only me ,
I wish if I could be your arms to make you hug only me, I wish if I could be your mind to make you think of only me, I wish if I could be yourself to make you love only me" . Then ,he heaved a sigh and completed “ If the unavoidable destiny hinders me from uniting with you in a real life, I will see you in my dreams , the wiser say” the sleeping is a foolish attempt to waste time “but I would say, the sleeping is a successful attempt to evoke memories of those persons who we want to see them in a real life . I wish if you Could hear my cry and my wishes" .
But unfortunately , she doesn’t hear his wishes because he has already disconnected the call while he reveals his dreamy wishes.
Comments
Anele ...
Please ,do not say that you are not good at poetry .For me ,you are a talented poet Anele . Your words always touch the center of my heart. I like your lines and when I compare them to mine I feel my lines turn out to be nothing more than simple broken words .I still save many of your old comments . I felt great pleasure come upon me at once when I re-read them . They make me float in the clouds of reverie.
Thank you so much Anele.
Ha Nguyen @I feel that I am overwhelmed by pleasure as soon as I see your nice comments on my blogs .Thank you so much dear .
My dear Y.N ,Thank you so much for reading my blog . Yes , I have already told you I like writing.
My dearest friend Thanks :) you made me smile a BIG smile :)
Simmmmmmmmmmmmma @what a nice chance to get your wonderful comment here !
It has been quite a while since I saw last comment on my blog . The memories haven’t erased from my mind yet . When you praised me once in very special blog.Hope one day I can reply your unforgettable done .Thank you endless times for that nice blog of you .
Truly, it saddens me when I hear that a person does not meet our expectations. I mean we find him contrary to our expectation . But we should not loss hope .One day we will find a person for sure . Someone who changes our lives just by being part of it. Someone who makes us laugh until we can`t stop. Someone who makes us believe that there really is good in the world. Someone who convinces us that there really is an unlocked door just waiting for us to open it. This is forever friendship. When we`re down and the world seems dark and empty , our forever friend lifts us up in spirit and makes that dark and empty world suddenly seems bright and full.
Anele @ If someone wants to say to his friend these words in direct way “
proudly I behold your heart with mine
in an immortal bond.
To be friends is to have
a sincere spirit been twinned with another.”
So ,what is the best way to say that ?
This is great one tawfeeq like always full of emotion.
Yes dreams is a place that you can have whatever you want ..but for me I want to touch them in my real life ..
what a great feeling if you reach them as you have them in your dream and what a pity feeling if you find them completely differ than what was inside your dreams ..
Thanks for sharing :))
Dear Bala@Nighthawk has already asked me in his comment ! why does the speaker disconnect the call while he declares his wishes ? I think you have answered unintentionally him in very nice reply . Minds always rules over our hearts .Sometimes we forced to live in a doubled life but I think what we have to do is to follow our hearts in considerate way .I mean balance between the society’s thoughtful conventions and between real wishes of our hearts , and hope we make the right decision.We can imply what we need to say .
Bala ,it is pleasurable to see your nice comment here. Thank you so much dear .
⊱ Mickey ⊰ @Thank you for your nice comment and correction .That is very generous of you to read and spend time your time .
Dear Tawfeeq,
All words need not be spoken....Though he has disconnected the call, his words would have reached her for sure.....
We are getting afraid of the Society we live in, so we don't have the guts to reveal our wishes, which are true and needy for our soul....Our Mind think of all these and stops us to show the feelings but the Heart never listen to all these.....Sometimes, mind needs to listen to what heart says and it should allow the heart to live the life in the Dream world atleast...
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