The night was so spooky within the dark
when she walked alone through a very big park.
She did not know how she came to this place.
Her memory seemed been lost without any trace.
Her frightened heart was so weak and so loud
while the moon above her tried to look through a cloud.
The moon disappeared behind the cloud then again,
Her heart seemed to be caught with a big iron chain.
Then, suddenly, her legs were starting to run
because she had heard the shot of a dangerous gun.
She ran and she ran as fast as she could
but she was not leaving the park, she came to a wood.
The wood was so dense and the path was so narrow.
Then, on a branch of a tree, she saw a black arrow.
The tip of the arrow was holding a beautiful bird
It was a big caught eagle, no noises she heard.
The king of the birds, to see his strong suffer,
made her mouth very silent, there was nothing to utter.
She looked in his eyes, he had not yet died.
He did not complain, his eyes were still full of his pride.
She broke the arrow and the eagle was free.
And he flew with a loud scream to the top of the tree.
The eagle was chasing the darkness away,
while she opened her eyes to welcome a new day.
Who knows what does the dream probably mean?
Tell me if you had ever such a mysterious dream.
Rose Iris
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Thanks, dear Elen, I am glad to have entertained you so well. Adventures can be mysterious, too ... LOL.
Thanks for your comment. If people like what I do, it is always a confirmation for me to continue writing.
Hello Rose! I am impressed by your poem! Really good work! The feeling I had while I was reading was like I was watching a play in the theater listening the rhythmic voice of a man. Hmm... my dreams are more adventurous than mysterious :)
AG, you can read it as a story within a poem if you like. You know? I like to go unique ways because we all are different in appearance and mind and so everyone is unique.
Thanks a lot for your nice comment.
oh wow, is it a story or a poem.. it's very unique method of writing.. I am really amazed of your imagination.. Thumb up :)
Hahaha, dear Kal, believe me, please, I did not want frighten anyone with my poem.
I thanks you for stopping by, reading and commenting.
The eagle was chasing the darkness away,
while she opened her eyes to welcome a new day.”
Thanks dear Rose, Finally I could take a fresh breathe. Really It was a nightmare for me too.
Thanks, ELF-Noor.
Thanks, Luci, I tried writing a poem again. I have not done it for long.
Awesome... ^_^
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