I can't feel in my heart beating

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I can't feel in my heart beating

 

along of months were gone

I did not felt in my heart beating
I felt in eeriness inside me
Even when I look to my mirror
Staring long
waiting to that  this me
Why I can't feel in myself
I moved away from the world
where can I find my world
I am looking for it in the all of my power
to find my self
than 
I will feel my heart beating
by bluerose


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  • He should looking out the mirror and show the beautiful life.
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