Goodbye!

It's hard to say goodbyewhen you feel this is your homesafe and love covers youbut at the end the time rulesin front of all who Loved meI can't stop shedding tearsin this moment I'm very weakand my heart is sadI will only waves my handand walk from this wonderful worldkeeping all the memories in my mindto laugh and to cry for.--------------------------I wrote this poem in the memory of my friends who I left them 6 years ago in England while studying English Language. So don't think I'm doing it again here!!! ;)
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  • Thank you dear Lamiye, I would love to read yours too.
  • Wonderful poem.I also write poem.I like poems very much
  • I'm glad you liked it :)
  • hello...Mr Night

    the poem is wonderful ... in my opinion many of feelings and sensations in that. So, if any one read it he will find it is uncomplicated . Really I like it.

  • I modified my post, just to make things clear,, sorry If I caused sadness to some of you,, I'm here and I'll be with you all, thank you rose for your kind words. I'm feeling happy that all people love me here and having the feeling of living in one big family makes me delighted :) again,, sorry guys for this misunderstanding!!! Your beloved one, Night.
  • Night..im glad it is just a poem i mean that you wont leave as they thought..
    I was shocked this morning when i knew that one of my friends has left ..i hate to see my friends leave ..i think this club is our home to meet each other and sharing our thoughts and knowledge ...three of my friends left this month dont know why !!!
    But who left this morning surprised me a lot ....he was a good brother.
    Any I wish all the friends who left or is still here happiness and joy.
  • Thanks irina :) I appreciate your care.
  • Well Done!!!!! It means youe life is going on ......... and we are happy,
    my friend.
  • Irina, Karenina, Ali,Tara, Rosemie and nebia, I'm very thankful for your kind words,, I'm sorry if some of you thought I'm leaving,, well, how can some one leaves his home so easily and even if that happens and I think not, my heart will always feel sad, and I don't want that to be so.This poem I wrote it when I left my English school in the city of Bath 4 years ago, It was sad but my life kept going.Yours, Night.
  • I hate goodbyes and generally people never take time to say goodbye, they just disappear suddenly ! I appreciate honestly your courageous way to say goodbye but I hope you will think more before leaving. Think of all those who love you and that the impact of your leaving will have on them. Good luck friend.
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