Good Memories.

Today in the afternoon I went to see the cycling race with my brother and my sister. This event is usually do in this season every year in my country. When I was child every year my father took me to see this event with my brother, today he could not. I enjoyed this event because people around here go out to see in main road the cycling race. I think we usually remember the good memories in our lives and these make us feel happy. Few year ago I worked in the city of my country and I could not to see this event and I could not to stay many days with my family. I missed this event and others. I enjoy spending time with my family because I think good times to make us happy. If you can to correct this notebook Thank you. I am learning this language.

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  • Hi, Tamara.
    Thank you for read my notebook. I read your comment. 
    I am learning english at the University and I would like to speak it fluently. I would like to tell you some tips that I do to improve my learning.


    1. Learning with Stories or fables.
    Read something interesting it is useful because we do not tire of them and these are not boring. I like to read stories. I learn new vocabulary and I try to use them everyday in my notebook.


    2. Audiobook.
    I like audiobook because it is useful to learn the pronunciation of the words sometimes I have to listen again and again. This help me to remember vocabulary too.


    3. Pictures.
    We can learn with pictures, we can talk about the picture that we see. What are they doing in the picture? What are they wearing?
    I hope something of it can help you. I think when we learn something interesting it more easy to remember.

  • Oscar,

    Great writing, I could feel your emotions in your writing. One of the best ways to improve is to not give up and write as much as you can. I noticed that there are a few missing articles such as (a or the).  "When I was a child . . ." and "A few years ago . . "

    I am currently attending college to be an elementary school teacher.  One of the classes I am attending is helping me to learn strategies to instruct students in my class that are English language learners. I need to write a paper using my research.   I found this website and thought that I might get some helpful ideas from the members on this site.  I would greatly appreciate any responses.  What I am looking for is the following:

    What advice would you give to an elementary teacher to help students who are learning English be successful in school? 

    What are some things that helped you learn English?

    What are some ways I can make school a positive experience for my English learning students?

    Thank you for any comments.  This will help not only me, but those who I will teach.

    Tamara

  • Thank you for your corrections Seeker. Thank you for your comments. Yes, We can learn from our mistakes.

  • Oscar good job,keep it up.Don't worry about mistakes.Go ahead,there are plenty of friendly teachers around here.Thank you SeeKer I appreciate your kindness.
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