Expector Smith's Blog Challenge : Its >< It's

Have you ever asked yourselves what living means? For me being live is to stay in a giant spinning ball when it’s sailing in ocean stars. Its spin gives us magical effect in our outer appearance, some people would call it ‘getting older’ or ‘growing up’ and so on, but for me it’s a kind of time traveling. In life, it’s not only about ‘where’ but also’when’ which means our lives is framed by place and time. To be alive is to be filled by energy of nature. Its energy positioned us as  the part of life stream, connected to everything by invisible strings and involved us in silent conversations with the whole universe. Even when the live is end, this energy wont disappear but turn into another form. Needless to say, we are always be the part of the cosmic. One for all, all for one. 

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  • Dear Shoba!
    Thank you for visiting my blog and leaving lovely comment here. I think we all do. At this point we all are philosophers, because this field is asking about everything include our lives. Answer will come for those who searching for it^^
    Have great day!!!
  • Hi Peppo,

    I have also wondered many times what exactly I am doing on the Earth, who I am and what will happen to me in the end. Your thoughts on this topic are nice and excellently written. Thank you for sharing, peppy Peppo.  :) 

  • Hello lovely Eva!

    Your comment successfully makes my face 'blush-blush' lol xD 

    Thank you so very much^^

    Mon frere said I could be anything I want and someone told me that someday I will be something. I think that's how a life started, to be trusted, have a faith in it and enjoy the process. I still don't know what future hides but when my time comes, I want to face it with smiles on my face, aren't we all like that? heee... 

    Btw I just get hit by deepness, hope someday can be philosopher/scientist for real^^

  • Alright, I have change that, include our live --> our lives,. 

    Thanks for the correction^^ 

    Have a good day, Expector!!!

  • Great job!

    You used all of the its and it's correctly. Be careful, don't confuse 'live' with 'life' - you can say 'my life' or 'our lives' or 'I live a happy life.'

    There's a common mistake in your first sentence: 'Have you ever asked yourselves what does living means?' It should be a reported question, so you don't need the helping verb 'does', you could rewrite it this way: 'Have you ever asked yourselves what your life or living in this world means?'

    Hope you get it! Keep it up!

  • @Lucinka,.
    The ash or skeleton could turn into nitrogen -I read it somewhere, lol- and the energy is still be a mystery. Some says it back to nature,. Join the constellation or whatever. Anyway, it's haunting, lol xD
  • @Serene,. Thank you so very much for the appreciation^^ that means a lot to me.
  • My energy is fading away :D so soon there will be just my ash or sceleton under the ground :) nice, philosophical reasoning, Peppo..
  • Dear peppo! To be alive is to be filled by energy of nature...nature can awken our soul and nourishing our dream.

    amazing writing.

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