Layla is a beautiful girl who just moved to England to work in a Super market. While commuted to work she met a handsome young man called Jim and she started to make a good friendship with him through the phone. Layla got addicted to Jim's speech. She used to be always on phone with Jim. He sounded caring. After few months of their phone conversations. One day they decided to meet in a pub. Layla was very excited and told her colleague, that she is going to meet Jim. Her colleague asked Layla to show her Jim's picture. As soon as Layla showed her his picture, her colleague shouted and screamed this the man you are going to meet? Be careful he is a cheater, an alcoholic and he destroyed many women's life. He spoke 'sugar- coated'. But he is a very dangerous man". The colleague explained everything about him and what he did to the other women. Layla was so shocked. Later Layla found out that everything was true. Jim was a 'sugar- coated' person.
You need to be a member of MyEnglishClub to add comments!
Comments
Dear Expector, Thank you so much for taking your precious time reading and comment. I appreciate it. Yes, I have to be more careful with my grammar. I will correct it.
Dear JET, Thank you so much for taking your time reading. I appreciate it. Yes true, every one should aware of the online grooming and social media relationships some of them may be put ourselves in to danger is in it.
Great!
I really enjoyed the way you tell the story.
Let's work on this sentence: 'Layla is a beautiful girl moved to England to work in a Super market. ' - Hint: Be careful how to combine 'Layla is a girl' and 'Layla has moved to England'. You can say 'Layla is a girl who (has) just moved to England'.
Keep it up!
Dear Afro, Thank you. I am glad you find it interesting.
story is good, interesting and educative.
Dear Shaila, Thank you so much for reading and liking. I appreciate it.
Thank you so much Seeker
My Dear LadyNoor, Thank you for taking your precious time reading and correcting. I really appreciate it. I know I must concentrate on my grammar. Thank you sweet heart.
Dear, Mishiakh, Thank you so much for reading and mention about the grammar. I know I am not very good in grammar. I appreciate it.
Dear abiba, Thank you so much for taking your time reading and comment. I appreciate it.
-
1
-
2
of 2 Next