envy is jealous of us
My delight
How do all the rituals
working hard on
making us apart
and we are still in the path of
of love
It is etching and humming
chasing an illusion,
just increasing our harmonies
more the purity of our love
Now we were convinced
for more longing
My delight :
No matter what his skin is
his goal had been invalidated
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Fantastic! I like it more then the English version.
Indeed, It's awesome.
Thumbs up! :)
Here is the original,
يغبُطني فيك الحسد
ياقُرةَ عيني
كيف بجميعِ الطقوس
عملَ و أجتهد
و نحن في درب
نمشيه و همهماته
تُطارد الوهم و النكد؟
فإنما نُزيدُ غيضه
كلما نقاؤنا عنه أبتعد ؟
فمنهُ إقتنعنا
و منهُ زاد ولهُنا
ياقرةَ عيني
فمهما غيَّر جلدهُ
مُرادهُ قد فسد
Envy is jealous of us! What a great imagery!
It reminds me of poem or song I once heard. Unfortunately, I can't recall it now.
"My delight :
No matter what his skin is
his goal had been invalidated"
I like the cheerful ending with pretty strong emotions...