DONI HABIBIE

Dear Readers,

I have a story for you, and it is a factual story,  I hope you can give comment after reading it.

Doni  is 17 years old. He is from a small village in West Sumatra Indonesia my country. He is not normal  boy. But he is brilliant man. He could make his neighbor or the people who saw him said salute  to him. Why ?? He could make some electronic medias  from waste. He collected  every thing such as : old batteries , machine, woods and other appliances to make his purpose.  Last week he was  success to fly an air craft he made. Every body did not believe this fact, because Doni  the young man who never goes to school and can not read. He also  is from  poor family, He did not reach  his education. But He did  a surprised idea which is not believed by every body who graduated his or her education in collage. He did   and explore his competence in making  all  electronic appliances just used old things. He took from  rubbish bin or  from his neighbors. In His life he wanted to make  a passenger air plane. " It's easy " he said when my local newspaper interviewed him in his village. " If I have material in my home, I will make  a plane for passengers. Beside that he can make a raft many kinds of electronic tape recorder. He saw  some his result of electronic appliances which  he has made. So that the people  nearby call him as DOni Habibie  the one of brilliant popular man in my country. I think you also know him so much, don't you ?

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  • Your story is interesting, and this young man gives us so much hope for the future! Thanks for sharing. 

    Here are a few English tips for you:

     Don't forget to use an article (a/an/the) before an adjective that describes a noun. Here is a lesson on articles if you need to review this rule

    He is not a normal boy. But he is a brilliant man.

    Also be careful of the different word forms for the word "success". 

    success (noun): It was a success. 

    successful (adjective): He was successful. 

    succeed (verb): He succeeded! 

  • what a good story,it can encourage us to progress everyday,thank you so much

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