The picture below is a bulleted entry from a list titled "Useful facts" in a document that I am writing. I posted it because I was worried that it wasn't written in proper English.
I've reviewed and rewritten the text in the bulleted entry in the above picture so that it's easier to understand and highlighted any text in it that was changed or inserted in yellow (but the highlighting does not show what was removed).
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Well... I can't understand what it is about... hope you find the answer!