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day of losing dreams

Posted by sara bennani on August 29, 2009

Day of losing dreams.Should i smile or cry or let go,i'm staring at my self so helpless.Missing out on the thing i wanted so,and nothing can get me over this..I tried and still try,to prove to my self i can.I'm not even able to cry,and surely i don't understand.My self said to me,i wish that for once you make my dream come true.But always you're unfree,choiceless and you can't even help you.And my tears are tired of falling,and my dreams are fading more every day.Even my voice is tired of calling,calling out, to my dreams to stay.Looking at my heart full of scars and seams,every day to me is a day of losing dreams...Eman Awad

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sara bennani August 31, 2009 1:22

hello ying,
thanks for your nice comment
have a nice time
Somying August 30, 2009 11:16

If we ever loosing our dream, we can still build up it again as we still breathing. Just keep smiling and continue dreaming.

All the best
Ying
sara bennani August 30, 2009 0:21

hi salim,
thanks for your nice reply, i agree with you we all should smile and keep hoping
have a nice day
sara bennani August 30, 2009 0:17

hi nadiyah,
thanks for your nice comment , sure i will keep dreaming
have a sweet time
sara
Nadiyah August 29, 2009 20:23

Hi Sara, there is a hope when you have ability to say something ...

keep your dreams ...
thanks for sharing it, nice poem

-Nadiyah-