It was cold winter morning. One of these mornings Mr. Frost left his paintings on the windows and Miss Snowflake surprised everybody with her magic as she covered over the night the whole landscape by white, glittery snow.
Winter Kingdom opened its gates once more again and exactly at this time two winter gnomes - brothers called Icicle and Snowdrift woke up after several months. They opened the door of their tree apartment and sladed down right away on the icy slide. Ooopps ...what an adrenalin ride! Happiness was shining in their eyes. First of all they decided to take a walk to check everyhing around. Both of them had great fun, they were sledging, enjoyed great snowball battle but then suddenly they heard somebody crying. When they came closer, they saw behind the snowy spruce a lonely Winter Fairy crying so intensively that both brothers immediately felt urgent need to help her.
Icicle asked: "What happened, my dearest Winter Fairy?"
Fairy answered: "Well... today in the morning I experienced something shocking! My father asked me to marry one of you! Either you... Icicle or you... Snowdrift!"
Both of them were staring at her with open mouth and didn't believe their ears! Icicle thought for a while it was a joke but Winter Fairy assured them she had to choose one of them till the midnight! Later Winter Fairy explained she loved somebody else, in fact she was in love with the Prince of Frozen lake. Both brothers knew it was high time to help Winter Fairy, so they didn't wait a single second and immediately ran to the Frozen lake to tell the Prince his love is in danger! Prince welcome them and afterwards he had heard this whole story, he packed his stuff and went with them back to Winter Fairy. It was time to make a plan! Prince took on clothes of Snowdrift as he was the same height and decided to try his luck in disguise. Then Winter Fairy holding hand of Prince, who was wearing Snowdrift costume went to her father's house and tried to persuade him, she chose Snowdrift. Firstly her father was surprised but as he knew about love of his daughter and Prince, he didnt believe his eyes, she betrayed Prince!!!
After few minutes of staring at them both, he said: "Dear daughter, I hope you chose a good guy and believe me, I do wish you all the best!"
Prince answered: "Yes, please, be sure her decission was very smart."
Father suddenly felt confused as he recognized this voice wasn't voice of Snowdrift and instantly asked: "Who are you???!!!"
Prince felt tired of hiding himself and decided to disclose his identity: "Dear father, I am Prince of Frozen lake and I do love your daughter. Please allow me to marry her..."
Father of Winter Fairy started laughing and they all thought he went mad! Anyway, after some time he told them: "You have no idea, how happy I am because I knew about your secret love and my plan was to little bit force Prince to marry my daughter as he hasn't have courage for several years to come to me! However, now finally, we can start with wedding preparations and our Winter Kingdom will again experience freezing wedding full of joy and love…"
Icicle and Snowdrift ran away to the forest to spread this news, whereas Winter Fairy looked at her Prince, he kissed her and they lived happily forever and after...
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Haha, smart father :) Nice story :)
Dear Luci, very well done! I liked reading. It's a fairy tale what people like to read when they feel the romantic of snow. Who never saw it can't imagine so exactly how it looks when the snow covers the earth, the trees, and everything in the nature. It's a fairy tale within itself. Snowflakes don't make noises, it's a silence as if everything is packed into cotton wool.
By the way, just now I came back from a short trip over New Years Eve and I found my hometown wrapped in snow. It was a surprise because snow is rar in the past winters.
Dear Luci! Hi! I do agree with you. It seems impossible for those who don't know how romantic winter is, how majestic its cold beaty is! Your story is really great. Thank you for the given pleasure!
Here are my corrections. You know, you ac always ask your questions. As usual, your main problem is the word order.
It was cold winter morning. On such mornings Mr. Frost leaves his paintings on the windows and Miss Snowflake surprises everybody with her magic covering the whole landscape with white, glittery snow over the night.
The Winter Kingdom opened its gates once __ again and exactly at that time two winter gnomes, brothers called Icicle and Snowdrift, woke up after several month sleep. They opened the door of their tree apartment and sledded down right __on the icy slide. Ooopps ...what an adrenalin ride! Happiness was shining in their eyes. First of all they decided to take a walk to check everything around.
Both of them had great fun: they sledged, enjoyed great snowball battle but then suddenly they heard somebody crying. When they came closer, behind the snowy spruce they saw a lonely Winter Fairy crying so bitterly that both brothers immediately felt urgent need to help her.
Icicle asked: "What happened, my dearest Winter Fairy?"
Fairy answered: "Well... today in the morning I experienced something shocking! My father asked me to marry one of you! Either you... Icicle or you... Snowdrift!"
Both of them started staring at her with their mouths open and didn't believe their ears! For a while Icicle thought it was a joke but Winter Fairy assured them she had to choose one of them till the midnight! Later Winter Fairy explained she loved somebody else, in fact, she was in love with the Prince of Frozen lake. Both brothers knew it was high time to help Winter Fairy, so they didn't wait a single second and immediately ran to the Frozen lake to tell the Prince his love is in danger! Prince welcomed them and after he had heard the whole story, he packed his stuff and went with them back to Winter Fairy. It was time to make a plan! Prince put on Snowdrift’s clothes as he was the same height and decided to try his luck in disguising. Then, Winter Fairy, holding a hand of Prince, who was wearing Snowdrift’s costume, went to her father's house and tried to persuade him, she chose Snowdrift. Firstly, her father was surprised but as he knew about love of his daughter and Prince, he didn’t believe his eyes, she betrayed Prince!!!
After a few minutes of staring at them both, he said: "Dear daughter, I hope you chose a good guy and, believe me, I do wish you all the best!"
Prince answered: "Yes, please, be sure her decision was very smart."
Father suddenly felt confused as he recognized this voice wasn't that of Snowdrift and instantly asked: "Who are you???!!!"
Prince felt tired of hiding himself and decided to disclose his identity: "Dear father, I am the Prince of Frozen lake and I do love your daughter. Please allow me to marry her..."
Father of Winter Fairy started laughing and they all thought he went mad! Anyway, after some time he told them: "You have no idea, how happy I am because I knew about your secret love and my plan was force Prince to marry my daughter to little bit as for several years he hasn't have courage enough to come to come here and tell me about his feeling! However, now, we can finally start with wedding preparations and, again, our Winter Kingdom will experience freezing wedding full of joy and love…"
Icicle and Snowdrift ran away to the forest to spread that news, whereas Winter Fairy looked at her Prince, he kissed her and they lived happily forever and after...
Wow, dear Luci! It is just a kind of tale I have expected to read on my challenge! It is winter magic tale with a good idea and happy end. It is about love and friendship, about mature wisdom and young ardour. Besides, it is a well-written story. Thank you very much! I will make some corrections some later, but there is not much to correct.
Happy New Year!
What a cute story. So nice and freezing. Indeed a winter fairy tale.:D
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