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Cooperation

Posted by bluerose on February 22, 2012

Cooperation 
We are a big family in English Club. all members care each other. this is cooperation. we to joined a group I Love English Club. we can Learn work together and practice writing in this group and develop the topic sentence in this group their a great teachers staff, they are help a lot I believe that Cooperation. this is Key for doing well our group.

this is my try to improve the writing I study subject A Course in Essay Writing1

 "Please help me to correct my mistakes." 

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  • Irina February 23, 2012 18:19

     Great blog! Cooperation- the key of achievement success. Thanks a lot of.

  • bluerose February 22, 2012 23:04

    Thanks a lot for your correction, dear teacher Tara ! really thanks dear teacher :) 

  • Tara Benwell February 22, 2012 22:22

    Great! You need to add some punctuation to your writing.

    For example: We are a big family in English Club. All members care of  about each other.  This is cooperation. 

    Can you revise the next line? 

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