BLOODY SUN
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(Satirical Poem)
Love motion in the air, with none to compare,
I travel fast and far longing it to be near.
Nothing is better than my butterflies’ wishes,
Beyond the season of heavens pure blesses.
A silver night upon a silver steed,
My entire wishes have to come ahead.
My life is like a diamond star,
That is rare in the world high so far.
Nothing is beyond with such my power,
Like summer warmth the world with it’s fierce.
Broken shards are now glittering jewels,
Hopes and wishes are getting their renewal.
Moonlight spread with its entire share,
Making for the perfect breath of freshy air.
Everything in me, with all its fairs,
With glittering eyes and golden hairs.
Sounds of symbols march the ground,
Searching to find missing heartbeat down.
My thrilling heart left with wonder,
Everything have to come in my under,
Bright and clear like the star with the night,
Pulled all my promises of so bright.
O! Bloody sun, why u have come with your shun,
You have broken all my gain with your fun.
I’m okay with my senses of their plights,
You have no need to come with your light.
O! Bloody sun, don’t make me so concern,
I’m okay with my invention.
(ROYAL FALCON)
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Comments
HI ANUM,
Thanx 4 showing ur great interest in my poem,,,,
n making ur valuable remarks
Hi SNR,
Thanx for giving ur highly valuable remarks on my poem,,,,
I admit that poetry it little bit difficult to comprehend the poetry but it is an art of reading when one gets a complete understanding with it,,,,,, it uplifts his/her soul into the world of imagination n curiosity
meaning full poem......
# Dear friend Iris#
this poem is very thought-provoking, n highly meaningful,
And full of symbolic meanings with its deep structure,
here '' bloody sun '' represents harsh/ bitter realities
And all the longing n imagination shows idleness of hollow men ( who built the castle in the air and do nothing, they try to flee from the bitter realities of the life )
this poem is divided into 2 halve
1- shows longing n imagination of hollow men
2- shows the harsh reality of the life, ,,,, which they blame and dislike
thanx (BEKI, IRIS N DARA GINO Sir) for ur such highly appreciative complements,,,
Ur words r highly motivated for me to improve my style of writing,,,
it is rightly said that,,
'' Always shoot for the moon, even you miss you'll land among the stars''.
Hi Falcon.
I don't see only satire in your poem. Of course, you may mean your words in that way, but for me, your words are also words filled with longing, and the wish to reach a happy life.
The sun in your poem seems used as the symbol of many life's empty promises.
We see the goal, but it can be far away like the bloody sun in your poem.
Beauty, wealth and glory lure us out.
The way there it's hard and for many people even impossible to walk there and to reach the destination.
It isn't because the people don't want, and it isn't that they don't work hard for their goals.
Maybe, the satirical approach in your poem is that you have painted a picture of a happy life that doesn't exist.
But people want to believe in that life, and nobody and nothing should destroy the pictures in their mind. Because hope dies last.
Maybe I am totally wrong.
Maybe others interpret your words differently than me.
That's the might of words, the power of poetry. Our eyes read but the mind interprets. So, everyone has his own interpretation.
Thanks for sharing your poem. I enjoyed reading and it made me think.
Main Suaj manta, lekin khoon nahi. You traveled fast and for a long time indeed. Wishes and hopes are not to be for a long time because life is not forever. Thanks for sharing.