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AG's Writing Challenge : Tell A Joke..

Posted by ELF-Noor on December 2, 2016

Once a Man was Driving his family in his Car ,

In the mid way He asked his kids,

My Sweet son, when You would Buy a Car then would You take me In Your car,

His Son replied very innocently,

NO Father, Then There would be My kids With me.. :D:D

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Once a Little girl was eating fruits with her Friends..

She picked an Apricot, Look Here 

Then She Opened an Apricot slowly Like a Ring Box,

See, My Proposal Ring...:D:D

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Thanks All,

Thanks A.G for this Challenge...

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  • ELF-Noor December 2, 2016 15:43

    #Shoba:

    I just Post the Image for the Expression of Little Girl During Opening Apricot Like Ring Box....:P

    thanks for Appreciation..

    #Shadow:

    Thanks for liking..

    I really appreciate it.

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  • ELF-Noor December 2, 2016 15:39

    #I'm trying to change:Too Long name.. :P

    Anyway, as I said to A.G, She opened Apricot Like Ring Box in a naughty way, and She pretend like she has Proposal ring.. :P

    Thanks for Your Comment..

    #Camel:

    Thanks for Visiting.. ^_^

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  • ELF-Noor December 2, 2016 15:35

    #AG

    Okay, For Understanding second Blog, Hold Apricot and open it like a Ring Box..:P Then you will Get idea What Little Girl said to her Friends.. LOLzz

    Many Many Thanks for Correction..

    I really appreciate it.. :)

  • AG December 2, 2016 13:37

    Hello, Noor :D 

    Thanks for your participation.. 

    As suggested by others, I couldn't understand the second blog very well.. 

    But I like your nice presentation.. your participation is always special :) 

    Well, as you have used the tag "Correction", Then I would like to refer to some mistakes :)

    • was driving his care with his family: I think this means that his family are participating him in driving which you didn't mean to say, I believe.. The correct is: He was driving his family in his car.. 
    • He asked from his kids: (no need to use "From". Either you can say, he asked one of his kids, or he asked his kids) 
    • when You will Buy... will You take me... There will be My kids..  In all of these sentences, you had to use the "Past tense", because due to "the reported speech" rules... you were narrating some events form the past "Father asked".. "Son Replied" then the reported speech must have used the past tense as well... "when you would buy", "would you take me" and "there would be my kids".. Or there is another possibility when you can use present, and in this case you had to use the double commas ("...") to refer that you quoted the sentence as it was said... hope it's understood.. 
    •  eating fruit: either you had to use the article "A fruit" or you had to make it plural "eating fruits"
    • In general, you need to pay more attention to capitalization.. There are many words which as capitalized where they shouldn't have been capitalized.. 

    Thank you for your patience on me :D 

    And thanks for your nice participation :) 

  • I'm trying to change December 2, 2016 12:18
    I The first one was really funny , but the second I don't understand.
  • Shoba December 2, 2016 8:50

    Very cute and lovely jokes, Elf. I like them a lot! I love that sweet little girl and the bunny, too. Thanks for sharing! 

  • Shadow December 2, 2016 7:08
    Nice to read your funny joke. Thanks for sharing dear elf. Noor.
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