A Plea ( Fictional )

Please don't leave me. I'm on my knees begging you..For me, your loss will be a irreparable and a irreplaceable one . I can't describe how I feel without you, NIGHTMARE, no its a very small word and it can not besiege the vastness of my sorrows. MURDER, no it does not hold a candle to my grief. HELL, no its just a poor synonym. I can't believe what has happened to you, I am not capable of dealing with this situation. I swear, I can't breath, my eyes are burning and my heart is torn apart. I would do anything to bring you back. Please listen, I am feeling so lonely without you and when I am alone I think , when I think I remember, when I remember I feel pain , when I feel pain I weep and when I weep I feel more lonely and the vicious cycle continues......So please don't leave I'm begging you like a slave begs for a favor ....This world will be like a  wilderness for me without you.



Will a plea like this make you change your decision?

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  • You write it so well as it made me feel that how does it feels when someone very special leaves you. If someone is such a loving and cares about you then you shouldn't leave him/her alone 

  • Afro, yeah, why so cruel, I'd agree with you but then we'd both be wrong..... :D

    cause life is cruel, but sometimes we just gotta put up with it until something good comes around.

    anyways thanks for the correction.

  • Honey Bee, you really have put wonderful thoughts togather. For me, fixing a broken cup will take rather more time then buying a new one, although the memories of the old will keep on stabing your heart and you will always regret the mistake that led to the broke up but getting used to this is certainly the way to go.

    thanks for your worthy views.

  • Oh....why so cruel....lol! Nice description ( I hope no one would face such a grief). Anyway dear Nh...Please write capital ''I'' and,you used some new words for me..thanks!

  • As for me, if I see a close person that made a mistake, of course I`ll give the second chance and of course I`ll change my mind. But if it continues, no pleas will stop me. I strongly believe that you can`t fix the broken cup. And even if you can, you won`t be able to drink tea from it. 

    I had an experience when I gave the second chance coz my ex bf was standing on the window and he broke it. Then the doctors came and he spent 30 days in hospital and anyway - I was right. It was useless. The cup was broken. 

    Thanks for sending me the link, NH. 

  • Mishaikh, I am actually amazed to see your patience in reading all the blogs and commenting on most, you really have got patience of a saint :D
    Actually I am surprise how can one come up with such honey coated words while he/she is a total paradox inside, I will call it a wolf in sheep skin, sorry to say but in this materialistic world of today this plea seems very much fictional,
    Let me clear any doubts; I'm not a pessimist :P
  • For me its really unkind and rude. 

    Well I can't help you for that EVEN. :D lol

  • Anah, I know we don't have to be cynical but the sincerity has to question marked so for me it's still a fiction, and I am not ignoring that EVEN :D
  • Sidra, that would be very generous of you :D but don't you think showing no mercy is the order of the world :P
  • Noa, I agree, surely the things won't be the same as they were before, and yes one might regret that moment in future.
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