My dear angel JennyYou are an apple of my eyeYou are the most beautiful thing in the worldWhen I see you face,I feel refresh and happyWhen I can't see you face,I lose hope at anythingSo, you are the only love in my mindAlso,You are the sunshine in my lifeI can't live without youAs long as you be with me,I will give anything I own to youYour love,John chan
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"Be with someone" means you want to keep a person's company to yourself.
Example: I want to be with someone when I grow old.
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What a lovely poem! You must be inspired that you were able to come up with this nice poem.
For the correction, please take note of the following:
1. You are an the apple of my eye (Use "the" when the subject is specific.)
2. When I see you your face,I feel refresh and happy ("you" is a pronoun while "your" is a possessive pronoun)
3. As long as you be are with me,I will give anything I own to you (linking verb "are" agrees with the subject "you")
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