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fa January 20, 2011 6:24

notears,

Waiting on hotter than ignited charcoal

fa January 19, 2011 7:57

anele,

I do not think you are weak in interpreting,

you are interpreting from the dark side of the moon, which is something worth looking at.

fa January 19, 2011 7:54

Anne Hodgson,

Hello teacher, you honored us here by your comment.

The writer is not locked in, but drowned in a glass trying to swim out of it to the big sea of

freedom.

fa January 19, 2011 7:48

Nadira,

Dear friend, commercializing in my Blog is not allowed unless you pay a fee.

Nebia January 18, 2011 21:17

We need your design here dear anele.

As you mastered always, please.

Nebia January 18, 2011 21:16

I think we are two here Anele?

I saw it more moral than emotional but this is the magic of poetry. As if the poet is in our shoes sometimes and speaks our feelings. I still cry after love stories on tv and while listening an emotional song.

I am crazy with love I think lol!!!

What do you think sisters, Nadira and anele?

I am no?

Nadira January 18, 2011 19:34

brrrrr biting words as cold as bullets of snow.

I feel pity for the soul which gives judgement because no soul is sweet and candy , there is something deep within the inner crust.

If the soul is incapable of understanding the complex of humane emotions and classifies one above , that soul needs to be pitied indeed.

Thumbs up to you Fa sharing a contrast emotional words bringing out the reader 's intellects to understand the agonies penned..:)

fa January 18, 2011 13:57

anele,

Oh, you took it that way!

very interesting for me really.

fa January 18, 2011 13:56

Nebia,

That's right, what we feel is controlled by what we want.

Thank you.

Nebia January 17, 2011 17:01

Very poetic, Fa?

But full of sadness too.

Doors are opened while others are closedThis is life!

Yes! You are right but sometimes we blame the lack of luck, no?

In arabic:
We run after those who do not care and we care less for those who run after us.Very nice, fa.

It is different from the others poems, in my opinion as if here there were more mind logic than the heart's one, am I right?

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