In amid crowd
In a place
all are
complaining injustice
all are calling
Tenderness
In the book of time
I looked for
the unjust
but,
there was
no name
no address
All are oppressed
and all
are full of
sadness
I discovered,
only
Who he looks for love
is looking for Grief
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Nadira,
My old tree friendship, you are saying the exact meaning in a different way, thank you.
I can understand the feeling of words , Who he looks for love
is looking for Grief, We are living in a fast moving age, life is not that simple and at leisure it used to be .
People are not contented with what they have , more of being oppressed , injusticed.
The essence of love, joy being appreciated, fairness gets the step motherly treatment
Fresh,
Hi again,
The core of that poem is, In love, object and subject are feeling oppressed .
I will ask this question,
Have ever been cross someone who would say to you " I am unjust with him/her in my love so I broke up ?
Good catch,
Yes, When there are oppressed, there must be oppressors: that's the sarcastic part of it, the doer and the object are oppressors.
Dear anele,
Where is the discouraging relationship statement, where is the pessimistic view leading to despicable state, where is the indication to insincere, deceitful, hypocritical, a grievous thing to look for love if one would end into this state?
Fresh,
Your way of commenting is alluring.
It is my greatest pleasure to be one of your favorite member here .
THANK YOU for your lovely words
M.Adaway,
Thank you for your exaggerated compliment.
anele,
Your advice is in consideration, I am trying my best to understand if I am the only unjust in the whole world to be in grief of Remorse.