Lonely night.
I am alone here in my bed.
There is a lonely night ahead.
My biggest fears, I try to cope.
And I don't know if there is hope.
The lonely night makes dark the sky.
There is no moon the clouds are high.
Where are the stars? Where is the moon?
Also, the wind has fallen swoon.
While watching to the silent night,
comes from the sky a dazzling light.
It comes me close and smiles at me.
I take a breath and feel so free.
As lonely as the night might be.
With this bright light, the worries flee.
The light brings hope, drives out the sorrow.
A new day will begin, tomorrow.
My breath becomes so calm and deep.
I close my eyes and fall asleep.
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Thanks a lot Mayumi.
If somone likes my poem, it's the best award for me. It is an encouragement.
Wow! Very poetic! It's lucid and vivid beautiful piece, Rose. Those are simple words yet you eloquently put them together. It's like a short story that has a captivating beginning, a convincing middle part and a great uplifting conclusion. It has a calming and cooling effect on me. :)
Thanks for reading and commenting on my post, dear Fizzy.
Thanks for your nice words, Mishaikh.
As always, I appreciate your opinion very much.
Yes, Rose. It was written by me.
Thank you for your lovely words. ^^
the flow of those words are great.. ^^
You know Rose this is very spiritual!
Beautifully beautiful. Such beauty transpires only from a tender heart.
Thanks.
Thanks also to all those who pressed the like button.
My pleasure, dear Rose!
You are lucky that you can fall asleep fast. Sometimes I can't sleep at all at nights. Maybe I need to think less and sleep well.
Thanks, ELF-Noor.
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