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mayumee's poem no.6

Posted by Mayumi on May 16, 2010

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Who Are You?

Who are you?

A perfect mirror,

A perfect reflection,

And an intelligent one...

Who are you?

A unique human,

A unique creature,

And....a unique man.

Who are you?

Another soul searching for the answer?

Like me as I ask myself who I really am..

Another soul searching to advance himself..

'Cos advancement into completion is what life is..

The perfect order of things God created for us, in the very first place...

But for the meantime just remember,

Yes, we are! We have been evolving,

But even now we are just perfect in our present state of being....

 

P.S.- this is my answer to the question of Sala Mohamed to his beautiful, beautiful poem..This is his poem:http://my.englishclub.com/profiles/blogs/who-i-amwho-i-am

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  • messy November 21, 2011 8:09

    WOWWWWW..

    you have a talent in poetry mayumi!^_^

  • Mayumi April 25, 2011 3:48

    Hendroooooo, mah man!

    How have you been? Yup long time no see, no hear, no news! hahaha!

     

    Thanks for passing by here. Hope to catch you soon.

    S

  • Mayumi April 25, 2011 3:46

    Hi Ika, my dear..You're giving me inspiration to write again..Ahm, I don't have idea for now but I will soon.

     

    Thanks for the encouragement..

    Take care!

  • Mayumi April 25, 2011 3:44

    My dearest Manuela

    Thank you so much! I've noticed that you commented here twice, that's very flattering..

     

    Hugs,

    mayumee:)

  • Forget-me-Not April 24, 2011 20:57
    Dear Mayumee, what a beautiful answer you wrote here. You are talented and it's always a pleasure to read your poems.
  • Mayumi May 21, 2010 9:02
    Thanks Mr. Night!....
  • Mr_Night May 21, 2010 6:44
    Great poem, from a great poet!
  • Mayumi May 20, 2010 17:10
    Hello My dear Manuela,

    Thanks a lot for your kind comment..It was originally a comment to Sala Mohamed's
    "Who Am I" but I decided to move it here..I like poems referring to man's nature and man's inquiries about life..

    Thanks for following my poems..
    And take care always,
    mayumee
  • Forget-me-Not May 20, 2010 14:10
    Dear Mayumi,
    You're doing great with your poems, you are so gifted. Thanks, for bringing here some freshness.
  • Mayumi May 20, 2010 13:50
    Hello My beautiful Nafis,

    Thank you soooo much...You made me smile...

    Thinking of you,
    mayumee
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