I want to be the first that you see when you open your eyes
I want to be the last that you see when you intend to close your eyes
I want to be there in your every dream
I want to emblazion your days
I want to see your smiles
I want to see your laugh
I want to see your jokes
I want to feel your affection
I want to be there when you are weary
I want to be there when you are brittle
I want to be there when you feel you are lost
I want to be a part of your bliss
I want to go where ever you will go
I want to follow what you want
I want to hear your advice
I want you to be my king
Oh God, am I too selfish?
I just remembered my wish
Anyhow, I'm just a girl
that has desires and dreams
And all that remains is him
Oh God, give me a way
What should I do to face
this long and deepest feeling
To love him...
~.~
by Onee
(just my old poem) ^^
Thank you for reading :)
Comments
Thank you so much, Roman. I'm glad you like it. :)
No, Onee. I am glad that you had those good feelings and wanted to share them with us!
Thank you for reading my old poem, Roman. :) I hope you won't get sad reading those melancholic words, I laugh instead. :D
Wow! :) This is a very nice poem! Thank you for sharing Onee!:)
Dear Serene.... How did you know that? hooh.. :o opss! Sorry for belated response. Please don't open my cards..... :D I'm so happy reading your comment. You're a true friend. ^_^
Dear Onee!Nice and awesome! You pen-down your deep feeling here..
Seeker..............., you gave me lots of homework now.... lol.....
Many thanks for your awesome comment, my friend. ^^
Dearest abiba,
Thank you so much for your wishes. Ameen. Once again, thank you dear...^_^
Dearest Lady Noor,,,, ^_^
Thanks a lot...............for feeling it. ^_^
To be honest, nowadays, I don't like to share a sad moment or a hopeless feeling. hehe.. :) However, I may be able to write a sad love poem with the saddest words. :D
Oh, do you think so? N Naim.... I feel so good now... Thank you so much for your visit. :)
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