the story and its contents are fictional and are written by me , i hope you all would have a great time reading .

Jonathan , the big brother , who came under the responsibility of his four younger siblings , Alpha , Timmy , Marcus and Suzanne , after the death of their beloved parents they came under the supervision of their big brother Jonathan , who loved them like his own children . parents didnt left any heritage so they were in an apartment on rent , Jonathan didnt have much education so for the sake of his siblings became motivated to work over time as a cashier in a nearby restaurant , he wanted his siblings to completer their education , in those hard time he found the love of his life , Stacy , they married and his siblings were happy to the extent as they found their mother , Stacy cooperated with him in those hard time , they all went to college , especially suzanne was more attached to her big brother , they had him as their last support and Jonathan was willing to do give them their all , as some years passed timmy , marcus and alpha graduated and suzanne planned to leave the country in search of opportunities regarding her field of economics , the fact that jonathan financed their needs led them into standing on the front and they were finally getting somewhere in their lives with their jobs.

Jonathan also had a son , little ben , he was very dearer indeed , as time droves , summarizing the fact , the 3 brothers and suzanne were quite capable now , which was a fact of relaxation for jonathan and his wife stacy , they were quite happy now and suzanne used to visit but the younger brothers , they were nowhere to be seen for months , busy life , jonathan never minded much , but he always want them to atleast call , stacy called them when jonathan wasnt around and told them that their brother expects their contact and misses them .

stacy on the call 

stacy - you know very well timmy that your brother misses you 

timmy - well stacy , you know what , you better take him to treatment because he scares me now 

stacy - and why is that , why are you saying like this 

timmy - well , you act like u know nothing but u very well know that for years now , i am done of listening about his imaginary friend , nobody gives a damn , i m done hearing that name and i aint believing that

stacy - i know but i cannot force him , his heart will break , u need to support your brother

timmy - the guy has become a freak , am outta here , u better stay with him and his imaginary brother

Jonathan always in his dinning room used to talk to someone and called him the 4th little brother , Maxis , he took his siblings , and many times have said to greet your brother maxis , Suzanne has been kind but brothers have always messed up every time , saying to jonathan that hes a mad man , which broke him several times , his wife supported him and jonathan refused to go to the doctor , he said that what he witnesses is real and everyone must believe that , times were taking a drastic turn as jonathan was finding hard to the job because of backbone issues that developed over time .

Jonathan - you know stacy , my brothers dont visit me anymore but i m happy that my angelic brother maxis stays by my side , no hurt full feelings , at least maxis and you understand my pain.

stacy - dear honey , dont worry , i will be with you all the time , you dont need to stress 

jonathan - i dont wanna stress but i m too tired , ben is growing up and i have to find a new job , they are not accepting me anymore , we have so many expenses to bear , i m in fear

stacy - dont worry , i will work , as a waitress in the near by restaurant 

suzzane came to know about this so she called the brothers and none of them bats an eye , they said that everything is fine with them and that big brother only exaggerates situation due to his mental health , suzzane started helping by giving money to stacy silently so jonathan doesnt know 

Marcus came by to visit , in his luxurious ride , big brother was sitting and became quite excited to see marcus after many months 

jonathan - OH MY , marcus 

'' hugs marcus ''

marcus - yes jonathan , i am here , check out my new ride , cool isnt that , the new model , just out in the market 

jonathan - wow i am so happy for you marcus bcz that is what i dreamed of , seeing you well settled

marcus - well , there i am but see this , the tactics i developed to reach that high in such a short amount of time , if you have developed a little percent of these , i hope you have reached somewhere but well what can i say

jonathan - hahaha , well , you know our times 

marcis - times are all the same , brain should be used effectively , i m now going to the car showroom meeting , clients must be waiting , take care

jonathan - take care marcus , do visit again 

stacy came out and jonathan did hide his tears successfully , smiling at her , telling her that marcus came by and he was happy to see him well , stacy knew the tears but acted normal , jonathan was obviously shattered and hurt of his brother words after all he did , in his life , for his siblings whom he took care of like his own children .

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CHAPTER 2 SOON TO COME , STAY TUNED 

CORRECTION OF MISTAKES ARE WELCOMED , I MAY ALSO HAVE  WRITTEN'' U , R '' WORDS IN A HURRY AS I WAS WRITING QUITE FAST . 

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  • CHAPTER 6 IS POSTED NOW , HAVE A READ GUYS 

  • Sure
  • Yes, i will read all the chapters soon!

  • Hi Roman , Glad to see you here , good thing is that i m going to continue writing final chapters in a few days , thanks for showing interest in the story , i hope u like it and have a great read .

  • Hi White Knight! I have just read your story! It is cool and interesting and looks realistic! I like it and i want to read other chapters now:) Thank you very much for sharing! But this Marcus is -_-

  • Thats an amazing analysis ⓔⓡⓩⓐ ,indeed ,the sacrifices he made and supported them like their own children , this cannot be weighed in terms of money , chpt 2 is also out erza , please have a read and share your valuable opinion , Thank you  

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  • 'Brain should be used efficiently'These words seem to be very mindful advice from the mouth of an ordinary person but when they are uttered from the mouth of the ones for whom you have sacrificed all the logical,moneymaking opportunities and you have used your conscience efficiently instead of your brain,every single letter of this sentence is stuck in heart like an arrow..
    I hope those guys will learn how to heal this wounded heart in the next chapter.
    Thanks for this gripping and impressive story.

  • Thanks a lot EMAN

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  • Thanks A lot SNR 

  • Thanks A lot 

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