Story "The Last Message"

The atmosphere seemed to feel comfortable. The wind blew the leaves are yellowing. One by one, the yellow leaf break away from sturdy branches and went with a hot dry wind.

The People were passing by on the street regardless of the hot sun in the afternoon this autumn. The huge trees and beautiful has shade of skyscraper buildings, Guyana. In this town, a beautiful girl lived that has 18 years old, Stallen. She lived in a house that is very simple, there are only two bedrooms, one living room, one dining room and blends with kitchen. However, he juggle their home became like a palace decorated with tulip flower garden.

     Every morning she took care of the garden, happiness and cheerfulness look on her face that is entering adolescence. For her the beauty of flowers is a divine creation that cannot be described with words. Proving that how glorious will power. Unfortunately, she cannot see how beautiful tulips area is blooming in the spring. Yes!!  This is because she has lost both eyes else is to be beautiful. A tragic event that has been scowled both eyes.

December 20, Tonight is the night that it was full of grief enveloped which makes it almost crazy face the real situation. A deadly accident that is claimed the lives of mothers and fathers that they care.

The incident began when she and her family went to a wedding in Morgania. But, in the middle of heavy rain in the tropics that the grains of water for seed corn, suddenly their car skidded when crossing the highway that connects the city Militian-Nangrek. They carried off the track, breaking the concrete fence of roadblocks that stand beside their left. Then the car fall as deep as 10 meters.

And the accident also resulted in she lost both eyes that beautiful. So, she cannot see the beauty of God's creation.

Stallen is a beautiful girl. She has black hair yellowish brass. White face radiates intelligence. Her hair was rolled up neatly made him look older.  Her reddened lip was smiling friendly to everyone. How graceful and beautiful she is, the girl that had lost both

 

eyes. Beauty is not only visible on her face but also her heart like white as snow and soft as silk.

Nevertheless, after a bad incident that happened over the years, she prefers to shut out people that were around her, no cheerfulness and happiness that comes in her soft face. Day after day and year by year, there is no one any friend that accompanied loneliness, only a darkness and misery that had accompanied loneliness.

One month before the national exam in high school, she expelled from school. Right at that time, she was 17 years old. She was educated at the famous school in the city Houges. It is one of the good schools in the city. To maintain the good name of the school finally remove the flowers in the school. The teachers reasoned that, if there were children with disabilities that attend classes at this school, then it would make the school embarrassed with other superior school. Various kinds of negative responses came to Stallen, it makes she become increasingly brewed and worse. In deepest memories, she was still remember how tragic attitude of these teachers in treating children with disabilities, especially Stallen.

                 Now, Stallen has already 20 years old. It is now more than two years when she fighting for her own life without a single person who accompanied she during this time in solitude.

However, on a sunny day there came a beautiful girl, using a boat shoes, blezzer, and a coiling syall her neck, with bring a box of brownies cake and a beautiful tulips bouquet to beloved companions. Who is she? Well! She is Jasmine, Stallen’s friend when they were always together in high school. They are two friends that could not be separated. Many people say if their friendship likes “a star in the sky”. They are two friends who complement each other, they always sharing when they were happy or sad.

“Stallen, it seems these days the weather looks bright, right?.  Let’s go we find out fresh air! Do you not feel bored every day in the room? Occasionally,  you try the fresh air here, or at least you sit out in the garden in front of your house” Say Jasmine.

 

 

 

“Jasmine, do you not see my situation right now? I could not see anymore, my eyes have been blind, I cannot see anything that is around me, and especially you told me to look at the flowers in the garden and around the home front. How I can?” Helena said with sadness.

“Yeah I know that Jasmine! I am very different from you, you still have beautiful eyes and you can see whatever you want in this world,” said Stallen.

"No Helena! I did not mean to hurt your feelings, "said Yasmin. I just want you to be able to breathe fresh air and could feel how the fragrance of flowers in the garden.

"Jasmine, enough! I do not want to hear whatever of your words. Now, please leave me alone,” said Stallen (without any one word she directly left her with feeling sad).

It is obvious sadness and anger began looked at Stallen face although, jasmine is one of the best friends for her. However, somehow when she remembers it makes she more hate towards her friend. Yes! Probably, this thing is cause by Jasmine ever left her when she going down, when she and her family had an accident so that Stallen became blind. However, I wonder know the real reason why Jasmine went to abroad to leave Stallen at that time. Defiantly at this time and second Stallen hate jasmine and want to forget all the memories when they always together. And today after five years of Jasmine leave Stallen with solitude, she apologized to her with a sense of guilt.

Maybe, it has been countless how many words that have been spoken sorry by Jasmine to Stallen. But, her heart was not in the slightest open to accept the apology of jasmine. Yeah! Perhaps, her heart was closing to accept the apology of her friend. Until one-day jasmine getting desperate, he thought perhaps deserved that she could not get a word of apology from her friend.

Therefore, in one-day jasmine went to see her friend to ask for permission. Because she want to return overseas for the reason there are some things that must be resolved.

“Stallen, I want to say goodbye with you today”, said Jasmine

“ Indeed! Where are you going, Jasmine?”, said Stallen

 

 

“At this time, I have to return overseas because there are some things that I should finish there”, said Jasmine

Suddenly Stallen hugged tightly Jasmine’s body so that she could not breathe anymore. "Stallen, please let me go!" said Jasmine. Jasmine no… I will not let you go, do not leave me alone, it was enough for five years you left me! Shouted Stallen with sadness.

However, suddenly Jasmine’s heart feel heavy to leave her beloved friend. She did not want to make her friend fell sad like five years ago when she left her alone.

 

*****

 

Tonight the weather seems very nice. The full moon has reached the most beautiful phase. Still loyal coterminous with little stars glittering surroundings. Frogs and crickets take their place in the grand concert tonight. The wind gently caressing tones and whispers tenderly. Symphony of nature of the Maestro's work. Stallen was sitting alone on the front porch her house, under the moonlight while surrounded by fireflies. She began to remember about all memories when she was playing with her family.

"Mom, dad, how is the situation there?, I  hope both of you will be fine. Anyway, dad, mom, was your place look very dark, right? Same like here, Stallen feel this world very dark. Nobody in the world that can I see, Mom, Dad!”. Stallen said with deep sadness.

"Mom, Dad. Why life was so feels very cruel, I could no longer face a situation like this. I want to disappear wrote of this life so that I cannot feel the bitterness of this life. Why should me who received all this suffering, why no one else? Why God willing to take people who I love,Mom, Dad.” said Stallen with sorrow

Jasmine also cry when she heard the words spoken by Stallen. Do not cry anymore, Stallen! The God is justice and He was not going to test his people beyond the ability that he has.

“Let us come in the room! said Jasmine to Stallen. On the way to the bedroom Stallen say "if only I still could see just like normal people, surely I was very happy". "But I realized that I was no longer possible to see the beauty of this world", said stallen with pessimistic. Stallen, do not say it. We do not know what will happen to us someday. Maybe, someday someone who wants to donate her eyes to you and you can see again. Who knows, stallen.

The most important key is patience. And all will be beautiful in its time”, said Jasmine (give reinforcement to Stallen).

Suddenly from the distant direction audible of the shout that startled the entire motor vehicle users. Watch out ...... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!. Shouted someone who saw a silver Lotus car drove very fast towards Stallen. With the rapid motion of the rescue Stallen with encouraging her body in order Stallen’s body was not hit until Stallen was saved. But,  it is unfortunate that people who save Stallen has been lying low in the middle path and the blood had begun to flood the highway. Many people who stopped to see what happened and they immediately took him to the hospital closest to ambulance.

And it turns out the man who saved Stallen is jasmine, her friend. "Jasmine,,,, wake up! Do not leave me again! Shouted Stallen. Soon the ambulance arrived at the hospital and Stallen immediately rushed to the emergency room. The hospital was immediately called Family’s  Jasmine. Stallen want to enter the chamber the emergency room, she wants to see her friend who had saved her life. But, the hospital prohibits her to came in the room. However, she prayed to God hopefully Jasmine can stand against her pain and she can return recover.

Fifteen minutes later, Jasmine’s mother arrived at the hospital. At the same time, the doctor was out of the room.

Doc. How is my child? She is okay, right? Please save her doctor.  Please do anything that you can do to save my beloved child, doctor. Sorry, mom.  I have done a variety of ways to save your child. Now, we just waited an arrival of the wonders of God. Because this accident makes her head clash hardly so that it makes difficult to survive her. Now you can see your child.

Immediately, Jasmine’s mother was straight into the room to see her son. While Stallen just listen about Jasmine situation on state of darkness.

When Stallen want to come in the room to meet her friend, suddenly Jasmine’s mother yell and scold direct her." What for you come in this room? , You see what you have done to my daughter! You see that, she was coma and now she is at stake last. She was fighting for his recovery. Now do not disturb her anymore, she wants to break. All of these events happened because of you. Because she friends with you, she wanted to be with you because you are blind. So, now please leave her! Hurry up!”, said Jasmine’s mother angrily

Hear the words spoken by mother’s Jasmine, Heliana’s heart increasingly torn apart by grief. Tears flowed down her cheeks.

 

*****

 

 

Not a long time, at least of Jasmine started unconscious, she has begun to say the words gradually. And the word he spoke apparently is the last word.

"Mom, why are you scolding Stallen? You know mom, she is one of my best friends that is Jasmine love!”,  say Jasmine with a voice haltingly.

Dear, Listen to me! She wasn’t best friend for you! The evidence you can see that, she has made you like this. You should be aware that, jasmine!”, said Jasmine’s mother.

No mom.! Mom has misjudged for Stallen! She was a good girl. Maybe, this is the destiny of all Gods. God have brings me with Stallen in order I can help her to undergo her lives filled with darkness. And this time I can helpstallen, mom!” said Jasmine.

"Mom, I hope if Jasmine has gone, please give this to Heliana both of my eyes so that she can pass her own life without feel lonely again. Mom promise for me if someday Jasmine gone, please do not ever hate Stallen again”, said Jasmine.

"Yes dear, mom will never hate Stallen again", said her mother.
Turns out it was her last words to her mother. And at that moment Jasmine gone forever leaving hesr mother and beloved companions

 

 

 

 

 

4 months later ...
Jasmine’s mother went to visit Stallen’s house to give a letter. The letter is written by jasmine when two days before she gone forever. And the letter was entrusted to his mother to give for stallen.

 

My beloved best friend.

When you receive this letter, we probably will not meet again because I had to go to a distant place. I just wanted to say that I love you, my friend. And I'm sorry I have to leave for 5 years. I'm going to leave you is not without reason. I was suffering from brain cancer level 3.  I fight against my illness. Until finally I was adjudged to have healed and I went  back to see how you were. Helena do not cry anymore, I know now that you've been able to see again. Is not that what you expect this time. And now it has become a reality. You can now see how beautiful in this world. Thanks you have bring color in my life.

Jasmine

After she reads this letter, she was cry. It looks her tears in cheeks, and she promised that she would always keep these eyes as she keeps their friendship.

 

 

 

 

The End

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