Last night Tintin could not sleep properly, around 4 A.M she rose up. There was no chirping of morning birds. May be they were also in their deep sleep. Only the sound of a dripping tap was coming towards her ears and it was too annoying! So, she got up and went towards the direction to stop it.
Tintin fears from darkness so, always likes to sleep with a dim light. " But what's happened today, why there is darkness all around?" It seemed she felt stifle." I must see what is going on". As she stretched her leg ...' Oh, what is it, so creepy!" She was about to faint! Her mom could hear her and reached " what's up ,dear, do you get hurt?" "No, mom, I did not get hurt but there was something furry beneath my leg." " Furry...isn't your billi...lil like you!" "Oh, no, she was huddle up in my bed" " Okay, then come with me, I will see what is it."
Tintin got up unwillingly, her heart was pounding..wanted to leap out. "Ouch! I niped my toe"..."Oh, be careful, sweet heart and be brave, why are you getting nervous while I am with you."
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Thanks, Mishaikh!
Last night Tintin could not sleep properly. Around 4 A.M she woke up. There was no chirping of morning birds. May be they were also in their deep sleep. Only the sound of a dripping tap was coming in to her ears and it was too annoying! So, she got up and moved towards its direction to stop it.
Tintin is afraid of darkness so, always likes to sleep with a dim light. " But what's happened today, why there is darkness all around?" It seemed she felt stifle." I must see what is going on". As she stretched her leg ...' Oh, what is it, so creepy!" She was about to faint! Her mom heard her and reached her immediately " what's matter, dear, did you get hurt?" "No, mom, I didn’t, but there was something furry beneath my leg." " Furry...isn't your billi...lil like you!" "Oh, no, she is huddle up in my bed" " Okay, then come with me, I will see what is it."
Tintin got up unwillingly, her heart was pounding. Wanted to leap out. "Ouch! I niped my toe...” “Oh! be careful, sweet heart and be brave, why are you getting nervous while I am with you."
Thanks, Kaizen!
Billi..is tintin's lil Kitty...
Thanks noa sis...I will correct it.
What's billi?
Observation, in your sentence
There was no chirping of morning birds may be they were also in their deep sleep.
It's like two points in a sentence. Maybe if you want to write it in one sentence, you should use a comma to separate the two points. Otherwise break it down into two sentences
Maybe it can be written as "There was no chirping of morning birds, because they were also in their deep sleep" or it can be written as "There was no chirping of morning birds. Maybe they were also in their deep sleep"