Boy:
I am sorry baby
I promise you are my one & only
I'm trying to control to look for nobody
But the crowd & power is so silly.
Girl: SENDING A MESSAGES TO THE PEOPLE
I know who's real one for me,
though you are faking me.
I know why you guys playing on me.
And you just practicing hypocrisy.
Playing a role like a sissy.
I am not promising anything,
getting the moon or
touches the sun,
all I know I am just being me.
Maybe I am like a social worker,
caring these careless readers.
My time is like a diamond,
wasting this would be like a vagabond.
BOY
Shshsh! Listen to me, I can't resist
Calling her is like I'm sicked
Choosing her might be like a terrorist
Stealing you is not a good trip
But loving you is like a relief.
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I am Marie Lorabelle F. Reboya
i need to fix my hub pages
Yeah kinda yes he was totally like a thief.
If I am going to interpret this dialogue, it seems that the guy is madly in love with her trying to win her affection but she .... because of being treated like a toy by other guys feels hesitant to accept and believe his love for her.
I thought I read the last line as...."But loving you is like a THIEF." Oh my, I am having double visions again.
I like this line very much...."But loving you is like a relief." (sigh)
Thanks Lady Anne do you love it?
Lady Anne at part 1 the guy can't say any words but singing a song but a girl is seriously creating her own poem, but later on in Part ii the boy learns to listen her poem and made him speaks & creating his own jargons. Part II is purely an original lyrical poem.
Are you combining some lyrics of the songs to make a dialogue out of them? How do you do it? You must know a lot of songs. Do you take it line by line?
Anyway, this is something new. You are the first EC member who did this kind of writing. What a style!