I have changed the title a little. I united two of the titles.


The clumsy witch (who cried golden tears)

Once upon a time, there lived a little girl.
She lived together with her her mom and her granny in a little house nearby a beautiful lake, outside the city.

The house, surrounded by a garden, was just a small house but very comfortable and cozy. In the garden grew thousands of different flowers and there lived butterflies and birds lived there, too.

The girl loved the birds, butterflies, and flowers. She was a happy child.
The girl was not like the other girls her age. She was a witch by birth because her mom and her grandma were also witches.
The girl did not know that she was a witch though much of what happened was very strange, incomprehensible, and confusing to her.  
She was a smart and happy girl, always friendly to everyone. The only problem, she was a little clumsy in her movements. She tripped even over her own feet. At school, the kids laughed at her clumsiness.

Always, when the children laughed, the little girl became very sad and many tears poured out of her big blue eyes like a fountain and ran over her cheeks.

One day, there was a feast at the school. The little girl helped to set the table and to serve the food and beverages. She carried a bowl of lemonade with cut fruit.
She fell again, just at the moment she wanted to put the bowl on the table.
All of the kids were sitting around the table, the contents of the bowl landed over a boy's head.

Everyone laughed. The little girl ran away, very ashamed and sad.

On the way home, she noticed how her tears made sounds on the paving stones as if they would play a melody.
She wiped her eyes and then, suddenly, she saw tiny pearls on her hands; they were pure gold.
She was surprised and speechless. Then, the girl remembered a fairytale that her granny always told her in the evenings before she went to sleep. But this figure from the fairytale was a witch, and her tears have been sparkling little diamonds.

"I am not a witch," thought the girl. She stopped crying, picked up the golden pearls, put them into the pocket of her dress, and ran home as fast as the wind.

When she reached the house, she was excited and confused. Her mom already knew what had happened. It was time to reveal to her daughter the secret of all the female family members. All of them were witches.
All of them have to follow one single condition.
To do only good things and not to use their magic of evil or even selfish things. And never could they tell everyone their secret. If they didn't follow the rules, they would lose their magical power.

"Now are you a right witch," said the mother and with the time you will get much more power. Your clumsiness is over from now on. No one will longer tease you or laugh at you any longer."

"But then I have no reason to cry," said the little witch. "If I can't cry, I can't get golden tears anymore. I would like to give the gold to the school. The roof needs repairing, and we need new sports and play tools."

"Don't worry. You also can cry when you are happy. But you have to pay attention that no one sees your golden tears." said the mother and she smiled at her daughter.

The next day, the little witch went to the school with self-confidence.
In the previous evening, she has packed all the tiny golden pearls into a little linen bag.
The pearls jingled in the pocket of her dress. The little witch looked around. No one saw her when she put the linen bag into the mailbox of her school.
Nobody knew who had donated the gold.

The school got a new roof, and the children got new sports tools and plays.
The little witch had lost her clumsiness, and no one laughed at her anymore.
She was very responsible for her magic power and did many good things. She only smiled when people were happy if they found some golden pearls in their mailboxes when they need help.

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  • Thanks for stopping by and reading my story, Elen.

  • So, the gain was worth the pain. Her clumsiness leaded to good. Nice story :)

  • Evangelina,

    thanks for your encouraging comment, and again thanks for your suggestions.

    I do appreciate it very much.

    Now is only one title without a story **** The talkative cat *****

    I hope, there is someone who writes a nice story.

  • Thank you, Rose! But not all the blogs. Almost all:)

  • Thanks, Roman, you are a diligent reader of all the blogs here on EC. That's hard working. Hat off!

  • Thanks for this lovely quote, dear Kal, these are true words. And of course, also thanks a lot for your nice comment.

  • Such a beautiful fairy tale.  I like it very much. Your sweet heroin made my tears. You are always trying to give a good message to the society, through your writings. Good job. Thank you so much, dear Rose.

    Also, your story reminds me this lovely quote.

    My Lord Buddha has discoursed “ If with a pure mind a person speaks or acts, happiness follows them like a never-departing shadow.”

  • Rose,

    Just a minor suggestion;

    You wrote this;
    “The girl did not know that she was a witch though much of what happened were very strange, understandable, and confusing to her.”

    Understandable - I think you meant “not understandable” then it would be better to use “incomprehensible” or “mysterious”

    “Nobody experienced who had donated the gold.”

    Experienced - Knew.
  • Dear Rose,

    Ooooh, what a cutie cute story. I like your way, you are smart, killed to birds with one stone :)

    It is never fun to be laughed especially not when a person is so self conscious and focused on avoiding failures, but somehow exactly that provokes forward even more what we often try to avoid.

    Certain kind of clumsiness, I actually find it cute and charming.

    I really liked the way your have described all about the tears, that is done in an impressive way.

    It is a very sweet story, going from wondering what as her purpose, til she finally figured out that it was to help others. I really liked the way you ended the story, in such happy and peaceful way you left the character in the story.

    Thank you so very much Rose, for all your beautiful participation in the writing challenge, all your time, all your efforts. I can really only say how much I appreciate it.
  • Very good and positive story! I think it is good to read such story to kids at night!:) Real fairytale! I like that she is helping everyone! And the meaning of your story is good! We should help people if we can... Thank you for sharing Rose!

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