Writing Challenge: A News Report

Breaking news!

Two robbers were arrested a while before. At this moment they are in the police station of the town where they are being interrogated. Earlier in the day, a bank was robbed by them. The amount that was grabbed under the gun threat was large. There were three other robbers who managed to get away with a car which some days ago had been reported to the police as stolen. They were prosecuted by the police but so far nothing has been announced and it is believed to have escaped. As has been said by many witnesses, their faces were covered by Halloween masks, they were all kind and none of the people in the bank were hurt by them. It is persumed that the robbers are not dangerous and the whole action was done because of a large debt that had to be covered, however, the investigations are ongoing and items are being searched to allow the police to say with certainty whether they are involved in other robberies that have been committed lately.

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Comment by Elen on November 26, 2017 at 14:57
Hello dara, thanks for your comment. I rarely accept friend requests. I delete members from my list every now and then because I prefer to have as few friends as possible.
Comment by dara gino on November 26, 2017 at 12:25

Kalespera Elen, good news! Could I be one of your friends? Thanks.

Comment by Elen on November 10, 2017 at 13:41

Evangelina, this time, it was really easy for me to write a blog, so I wouldn't miss the chance :)

Thank you for your nice words :)

Comment by Evangelina on November 10, 2017 at 8:09
Elen,

First nice to see a post from you :)

Nicely written, though somehow I feel sorry for the robbers, thank you for sharing your breaking news.
Comment by Elen on November 9, 2017 at 14:47

Thanks for your comment on my blog, dara.

Thank you, AG :D

Comment by AG on November 9, 2017 at 6:57

very good, Eleniii :D 

Comment by Roman on November 8, 2017 at 13:25
I don't know why, Elen, let police to ask them:)
Comment by dara gino on November 8, 2017 at 9:29

Ifcharisto polly Ellen! This is another victory for mod. Onee_Chan. I agree with you Ellen, thieves should be arrested and taken to jail for their wrongdoing. Thanks for your quick response as the moderator said. Is it possible to be one of your friends? 

Comment by Elen on November 8, 2017 at 9:16

Thank you ella, for reading and commenting :)

Guys, of course there were cameras! I just missed to mention it. And yes, they were wearing Halloween masks. What makes you so surprised Estanis?? Don't you see movies at all?? Tsk tsk tsk...

Roman, ghosts??? What do ghosts need the money for??

Comment by Roman on November 7, 2017 at 19:06

Estanis, maybe they are ghosts and their masks are real faces!

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