Some dreams don't come
They aren't yours
Stop presuing them
They aren't yours
Some love stories don't begins
Cause there are much pains at the ends
You have to give
There you will be given
Forsake the lust of having all
Before you loses all
Follow the lights
Don't start the fires
Clean your heart and polish your soul
And " be the one who is killed but don't be the killer "
Don't cause miseries
Don't start wars
The world is enough for us all
We are making things scares
Open your tight fist
Blessings will fall
Rise your hands to the heavens and pray
Don't wait for humanity doomsday 

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Comment by Rosemary :) on August 25, 2018 at 14:48

  @Roman    " be the one killed but don't be the killer " isn't my words it belongs  to prophet  Mohammad  peace be upon him  . This is related to certain context in Islamic history  , which , is the civil  wars that took place after  his death  . At that time there were alot of killings among people  . The quote is a heavenly advice  that we shouldn't  be aggressive and try not kill others  at wars  because  killing is a deadly sin  . 

      It's a kind of redemption to be killed for the sake of the whole society  but not choose  to be the killer who is destroying life   and yes I do agree with you it can be interpreted  in many other ways 

Comment by Roman on August 24, 2018 at 17:01

"be the one who is killed but don't be the killer"

This line is not clear. I understand what you mean, Rosemary, but still, it can be interpreted in different ways.

Comment by Rosemary :) on August 17, 2018 at 9:14

  Thanks for your wonderful  comment  dear Onee :) 


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Comment by Onee-chan on August 17, 2018 at 4:30

Great poem, Rosemary! :)

You wrote the deep message in each line.

By the way, if you don't mind, this is just a note. There is difference between lust and desire. In this poem, I would prefer 'desire'.

Thank you so much for writing.

Comment by Rosemary :) on August 16, 2018 at 18:59

  Thanks Tam :) it's the law of abundance   giving  to others  means that you will be given the universe  give back who gives . But if anyone is stingy  life dosent  give him back  . He has no important   

Comment by Tam on August 16, 2018 at 18:34

Hi, Rosemary. Nice writing. I agree with "You have to give, there you will be given.". We can't get something without doing something.

Comment by Rosemary :) on August 16, 2018 at 18:15

   My dear friends  Olga and dara gino  . Thank  you  both for visiting my page  commenting and liking my blog  . I really appreciate it :) 

Comment by dara gino on August 16, 2018 at 17:31

Mashkoora ya Rosemary! I want to clean my heart and polish my soul. Is the world enough for all of us? I will really raise my hands and ask for blessings to come from Allah. Thanks for sharing. 

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