How quiet he has turned! A river of thoughts, an ocean of words.  Feels so worthless turning in to dumb stone, once was shining like stars.  May be looking for the words of love in the faces, but found the barren lands.  No cultivation, no shrubs, no flowers.  The thirst of words was like a desert, found no quench, so drowned in his own tears.  Gone alone in travel of life, and lost in the winds. O, wind any news of him?  When gone in the hibernation, everyone forgot, hardly found in the bottom of the lines, the one, once was found on the top of the list.  Used to play with the fragile toys, now roaming hiding his wounds.  Looking behind again and again, with the desire to see whom he left.  Forgot that so much indifference would turn into ignorance from other side. No one is bound to be with you, if you are even not with you.  Turned quiet, no matter, became indifferent no matter, but left some traces of love behind so may be remembered by the well wishers.

Views: 179

Add a Comment

You need to be a member of MyEnglishClub to add comments!

Join MyEnglishClub

Comment by Mishaikh on February 27, 2019 at 11:59

Onee:

You also didn't understand, so the "thought are scattered"

Thanks anyway for visiting, reading and comment.


Mod
Comment by Onee-chan on February 27, 2019 at 6:23

^^ What scattered thoughts!

Comment by Mishaikh on February 26, 2019 at 12:06

Thanks saba for understanding.  Sometimes I feel this way...................all scattered!

Comment by saba on February 24, 2019 at 19:33
Nice writing. At first, I didn't understand what you mean but after reading some comments I found it.
Comment by Mishaikh on February 24, 2019 at 14:14

Ocean

Thanks a lot for all the appreciations! Ocean

Comment by Ocean on February 24, 2019 at 3:48

 Hi Mishaikh! That was totally Super and fruitful reading. Thanks for sharing.

Comment by Mishaikh on February 23, 2019 at 15:45

Hey! hey!! Mayumi I didn't offend at all, rather I ENJOYED the comment.

You rightly guessed about.................experiencing a writer's block.  Yes I do experience this occasionally.

Your finding my writing "mysterious", thrills me.

I totally agree with your remark "You leave clues but there are elements in your writings that are like puzzles making us form our own conclusion. And that is for me an exceptional quality of a great writer. "

I often do so just to activate readers minds, like you said ".........always leave in deep thought".

You are one of my desired readers Mayumi

Comment by Mishaikh on February 23, 2019 at 15:36

 Rose Iris Will

That's what I was expecting of readers "going in deep of the emotions in between the line".

Thanks for being so considerate.

Comment by Mayumi on February 23, 2019 at 15:18

Hi Mishaik, 

I hope you're not get offended of what I wrote on my comment. I didn't intend to do so. I just meant that maybe you are implying something (I guessed maybe you were experiencing a writer's block) and I guessed it wrong. 

It's not that it missing something. I just thought your writings are mysterious and deep. I am personally attracted to your writings because you always leave me in a deep thought. You leave clues but there are elements in your writings that are like puzzles making us form our own conclusion. And that is for me an exceptional quality of a great writer. 

Please know that you are one of the inspiring writers here. You encourage us to write our thoughts by your example. 

mayumi 

Comment by Rose Iris on February 23, 2019 at 15:00

Wow, Mishaikh. Scattered thoughts, indeed. The sense of your words isn't obvious at the first sight, but reading between the lines makes a mosaic with a clear image and meaning.

I enjoyed reading your scattered thoughts,very much.
Thanks, once more again for being so creative.

How to Report a Member
1: Go to member's page. 2: Click "Report Member" at bottom of page. 3: Fill in form and send.

MyEC Terms of Service

Technical HELP

Please DON'T Plagiarize!

Test your level

MyEC Moderators
Robbie
Expector
Nadira
Paula
Onee
Nadiyah
Ma No

Josef Essberger

Official MyEC Page

Official MyEC Welcoming Committee

Forum

Do you love fashion?

Started by Glosky in General Discussion. Last reply by saba 5 hours ago. 3 Replies

Listen, think, then speak

Started by Zarkasy in General Discussion. Last reply by Onee-chan 9 hours ago. 1 Reply

Woman's Day

Started by dara gino in General Discussion. Last reply by Glosky on Tuesday. 36 Replies

Hello

Started by Glosky in Introduce Yourself :)). Last reply by Glosky on Monday. 6 Replies

Hi everone

Started by Júlio Rodrigues in Introduce Yourself :)). Last reply by Onee-chan on Sunday. 1 Reply

O.M.G

Started by _SERA in General Discussion. Last reply by _SERA Aug 4, 2013. 467 Replies

Which languages do you love in the world ?

Started by _SERA in General Discussion. Last reply by Narain Dass Roopani Jun 22, 2018. 360 Replies

About

© 2019   Created by Joe Essberger.   Powered by

Badges  |  Report Member  |  Terms of Service