If I can flow, like a river, through the dry lands,

That didn’t feel wetness since a long time….

If I can be cooked, like a rice bowl in a hut secretly,

The rice couldn’t be cooked….

If I can stay, like a smile on the lips of kids,

That forgot the smile….

If I can bloom, like flowers on the trees,

That everyone can be able to pluck them….

If I can sleep, as a true sweet dream, in the eyes,

That never had a good sleep.….

If I can sing a song like a bird on the door by door,

That the world can be able to wake up….

If I can spread love, as a loving mother to the hearts,

That who never felt love….

If I can be a wish light, in the dark hearts,

That has a hopeless tomorrow….

(I got the spirit of my poem from a most popular song in my country. And it sings, songstress, Hon.Mrs. Nanda  Malini)

My dear friends,

I can write poems in my mother language. But I’m no good at English. Though, I wanted to say something that heartfelt. Please forgive me for my wrong grammar and appreciate if you can correct them.

Thank in advance for reading.

 (My dear Eva, When I seeing your video, I felt more hurt.I’m thankful you. Cause, You are the person who inspired me to weave this post.)

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Comment by Kal on September 15, 2017 at 17:54

Dear AG,

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback.I'm always happy to see your comments.

Comment by AG on September 13, 2017 at 13:06

it's really touching.. The photo just reminded me of Burma's women and children.. my sympathy for everyone who hasn't shelter in the time of wars and hunger.. we really should think again and look at ourselves more deliberately to be definitely grateful about everything we have... 

Comment by Kal on September 13, 2017 at 10:45

My dear Rosemary,

Always you are encouraging learners.And highly appreciate your feedback.Your words made me a lot.Thank you so much, sweet friend!

Comment by Kal on September 13, 2017 at 10:38

Dear Estanis,

Thank you so much, for the praise my friend.Always your comments make me happy.Highly appreciate for visiting.

Comment by Rosemary :) on September 12, 2017 at 12:25

   Ur poem is wonderful  I enjoyed  it alot :) keep  writing  Kal u are gifted  

Comment by Estanis on September 11, 2017 at 17:53
So nice dear Kal mostly coming from you.

These words say a lot about your personality. Thanks a lot for writing. Keep it up :)
Comment by Kal on September 11, 2017 at 4:12

Sweet Ella,

Thank you so much, for liking my poem.

Comment by Kal on September 11, 2017 at 4:11

Dear Mr.Mishaikh,

I'm so happy to see your comment.Your words made me big courage and strength.Thank you so much and highly appreciating.

And always hope your kindly help.

Comment by Kal on September 11, 2017 at 4:06

Sweet Rahul Bhai,

Thank a lot for the feedback.Highly appreciating dear!

Comment by Kal on September 11, 2017 at 4:06

Dear Rose,

I know you are a great poetess.Such a person has commented my poem.I'm so happy. Thank you very much for your kind feedback.

Highly appreciating and always hope your help.

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