I want to be the first that you see when you open your eyes
I want to be the last that you see when you intend to close your eyes
I want to be there in your every dream
I want to emblazion your days

I want to see your smiles
I want to see your laugh
I want to see your jokes
I want to feel your affection

I want to be there when you are weary
I want to be there when you are brittle
I want to be there when you feel you are lost
I want to be a part of your bliss

I want to go where ever you will go
I want to follow what you want
I want to hear your advice
I want you to be my king

Oh God, am I too selfish?
I just remembered my wish
Anyhow, I'm just a girl
that has desires and dreams
And all that remains is him

Oh God, give me a way
What should I do to face
this long and deepest feeling
To love him...

~.~

by Onee 

(just my old poem) ^^ 

Thank you for reading :)

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Comment by Onee-chan on December 12, 2017 at 8:01

Thank you so much, Roman. I'm glad you like it. :)

Comment by Roman on December 11, 2017 at 7:16

No, Onee. I am glad that you had those good feelings and wanted to share them with us!


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Comment by Onee-chan on December 10, 2017 at 23:45

Thank you for reading my old poem, Roman. :) I hope you won't get sad reading those melancholic words, I laugh instead. :D

Comment by Roman on December 10, 2017 at 21:30

Wow! :) This is a very nice poem! Thank you for sharing Onee!:)


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Comment by Onee-chan on December 20, 2016 at 15:39

Dear Serene.... How did you know that? hooh.. :o opss! Sorry for belated response. Please don't open my cards..... :D I'm so happy reading your comment. You're a true friend. ^_^ 

Comment by Someone on August 6, 2016 at 11:11

Dear Onee!Nice and awesome! You pen-down your deep feeling here..


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Comment by Onee-chan on August 6, 2016 at 10:59

Seeker..............., you gave me lots of homework now.... lol.....

Many thanks for your awesome comment, my friend. ^^


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Comment by Onee-chan on April 15, 2016 at 4:37

Dearest abiba,

Thank you so much for your wishes. Ameen. Once again, thank you dear...^_^

Comment by abiba on April 15, 2016 at 4:06

May your all wish will come true! Touchy poem.


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Comment by Onee-chan on April 15, 2016 at 3:26

Dearest Lady Noor,,,, ^_^

Thanks a lot...............for feeling it. ^_^

To be honest, nowadays, I don't like to share a sad moment or a hopeless feeling. hehe.. :) However, I may be able to write a sad love poem with the saddest words. :D

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