The sun shined so brightly

The sky suddenly turned into cloudy and  dark

The joy's gone at once 

Catasthrope  sneaked

Terrible news I got

My lover went forever

It messed my soul up

Couldn't believe it, but it was real

Sitting down beside your stiff corpse

Prayer... tear...

When shall we have a joke again?

When shall we sing together?

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Comment by TrAp on Saturday

Hayabusa, Darius, Salma, thanks so mch.

Comment by Salma Ibrahim on Friday

Sorry about your loss.

Comment by Darius on Friday
Come on !
Can you write about "
the Begin" ??
Comment by H₳Ɏ₳฿Ʉ₴₳ on Friday

its not the end ....yet...^_^

Comment by TrAp on Friday

Thanks Janet for comment.

Comment by Janeth on Friday

I hope the sun shines brightly soon again Sleepy!  Best wishes!

Comment by TrAp on September 9, 2018 at 12:49

ARealiry, thanks so much for reading and commenting it. It will be my pleasure to have your correction. 

Comment by TrAp on September 9, 2018 at 12:45

Ella, it was sad, thanks for ur sympathy.

Comment by AReality on September 9, 2018 at 10:43

The Sun Shine, metaphorically it is hurting if it shines in summer and comforting in winter, 

But, Sune shined brightly and then it got cloudy also means that joys were lost and glooms overwhelmed all,
 Good effort, though it lacks a little in meter, It is a blank verse and?

Comment by nida on September 9, 2018 at 9:30

Oh....what a tragedy! I'm sorry for your loss, sleepy. 

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