Onee's writing challenge.  I am not describing "Dream"  I am mentioning a dream.

“OH! You have come again!” 
No reply, there was silence but “Yes,” was hissed in my ears.  She was looking very happy. Her supple fingers were caressing my forehead. 

“How much you make me wait, and then you part quickly!” My voice was trembling; I was staring at her beautiful face as I wanted to engrave her in my memories, so that I would never forget her, even when she parts away.  Her face was glowing like a moon peeping through the mist of my thoughts. Silence was all around. 
  “You will not go away now!”  I pleaded. She was smiling. After waiting of many years, with the depth of my earnest desire to have you, at last I have found you, why would I go away now?” “ Every breath of mine is meant for waiting for you,  the candles of your memories have always been lit in every night of my life, so why would I go now?” 

“ You always say so and part away,”  The words came out of my lips, in spite every word of her love was engraving on the page my life. 

“I also have been waiting for you with all hopes to see you, with the wish to have you.  You knit the beautiful dreams around me and then leave me entrapped in the net of them.” 

“No, there will not be dream now, now it will be life, your life, my life our lives!”  She was saying as swinging with happiness.  
“But who are you? Why don’t you let me know your name?”  I was trembling with emotions. 
“I am reality! I am life!! I am ………………………. Abruptly I was awaken.  I ran my eyes all around.  The room was full of her fragrance.  Whom I have always been thinking as my dream, she was so close to me.  She was always with me, but I could not feel the warmth of her eyes, full of “love”,  whose silent love at last brought me before her.

Adopted from one of my own blogs.


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Comment by Mishaikh on February 10, 2019 at 14:39

Onee all fiction, but real to life coz, it happens.

Comment by Onee-chan on February 9, 2019 at 10:24

Is it your true dream, Mishaikh? :)

Confusing question, dream is not real. lol

Comment by Fizzy on February 9, 2019 at 4:52

and with that.. this song for your Mishaikh .. hehe

Comment by Mishaikh on February 8, 2019 at 12:35

Thanks Rose for such a explanatory comment.  Your remark "SHE" reminded me my very first blog of my writing tenure.  Here is the blog if you want to read:

Comment by Rose Iris Will on February 7, 2019 at 21:15

Our entire life has driven by the infinite yearning for love.
Only grief can beat this most exciting and powerful feeling of life. When we lose our beloved ones, our heart has broken. It never again will cure, completely.
Dreams reflect our fears. Dreams can be cruel, but also, they remember us of appreciating, celebrating, and protecting love.
Love disappears when we forget the appreciation of quickly, and without a trace, as "SHE" in your tale.

Thanks for sharing this emotional story with us, Mishaikh.

Comment by Mishaikh on February 6, 2019 at 13:03

Thanks dara for your valuable comment.

Comment by Mishaikh on February 6, 2019 at 13:03

Mayumi - SNR 

I thank you both.  As I always say: "readers have the privilege to interpret the story in they way it touches their heart." 

I appreciate your views.

Comment by SNR on February 6, 2019 at 11:39


As always a fantastic blog describing a girl :D I think it's all about one sided love of a man for a girl whose name he never known but seen her in dreams always. 

Thanks for sharing your dream with us. :)

Comment by Mayumi on February 6, 2019 at 11:00

I wonder if this a story about a girl in a dream or the girl is a representation of life/reality? If it is the latter, wow it's a great twist of thoughts. It's a great writing. 

Comment by dara gino on February 5, 2019 at 19:17

We must dream and act to accomplish great achievements. Dreams let us explore the future and believe that someday, we will do something great. A short nice story by the great blogger from the intuition of our great moderator, Onee Chan.   

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