Heyy you! Dare to love someone??
Ohh, NO!! In this case, you'll be in DANGER.
Yeah, he's so HANDSOME.
He could be GOOD, SMART, or whatever...

You know you'll be in DANGER,
but why you keep going on??
I told you not to go to THE SEA.
You CAN'T SWIM well there.

You said you're ready for that?? O.K.

(day by day passes)

Are you happy now? I can see your smile,
I see you are in love each other.
But, what about next??
Have you ever thought about it??

Okay, I wish both of you will always be happy.

(months later)

Heyy, heyy, what's that WEEPING..?
You said you were ready for that.
You shouldn't be like this.
Remember your cheerfulness when you were without anyone.

Oh, dear..don't cry..
You're SINKING in the sea, but don't worry...
You'll move to side in time.

You could say you're ready, you'll be okay,
but you surely have a FRAGILE HEART.
No one will deny, it is HURTFUL.
This can only be done by LOVE.

~~~ *** ~~~

Thanks everyone for reading. Have a blessed month! ^_^

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Comment by Onee-chan on November 11, 2018 at 4:35

:p Nope, Bet. This is not the current me. :D I just can be melancholic,, sometimes. ^^ lol

Comment by bet on November 10, 2018 at 16:39

Aha....are you in this cindition now...lolI 


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Comment by Onee-chan on November 10, 2018 at 1:31

Sure, dear Fizzy.

Thank you for your wise words. Have a great weekend! ^^

Comment by Fizzy on November 9, 2018 at 12:28

you dont need to fear... love is hurtful but we can amend the past mistakes.. 

happy weekend Onee-chan


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Comment by Onee-chan on November 9, 2018 at 9:12

Dear SNR,

'Fall' is hurt, isn't it? ^^ :D

Yeah, you're right. It has many kinds of feelings that come without permission. Anyway, people like to 'fall....." :))) Thanks a lot for your comment. 


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Comment by Onee-chan on November 9, 2018 at 9:08

Ella,

Of course I choose LOVE, too. ^^

Okay, okay, I agree with you. But, mm, not always. :D

Thank you for your comment. Good day! ^_^


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Comment by Onee-chan on November 9, 2018 at 9:03

Mishaikh,

Thanks a lot for your appreciation. I think I need years to understand your poetic comment. :D ^^

Have a good day!


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Comment by Onee-chan on November 9, 2018 at 9:01

Hi ELF Noor!

I surely want a happy ending, too. ^^

Thank you for your comment. ^^

Comment by SNR on November 9, 2018 at 6:38

Love is the most complicated feeling. The more you run away from it the more is the possibility you fall into it. Happiness, feeling of belonging to each other, fear of losing, pain, sorrow. It has many feelings. 

Unwillingly u just fall into love. It comes suddenly to your life. 

Comment by ella on November 8, 2018 at 13:57

so.. 

love or not love?  that's the question ))

I would chose LOVE.. 

anyway we are all sinking.. with or without love..

but sinking coz of love is more valuable then sinking coz of nothing :D

thank you for sharing this.. :)

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