Be warn it may be the sad story of me

The tears, may be the memento for me

 

Which I am clearly seeing from your eyes

May you be wanting to hide from me?

 

I know I am surrounded by mirages

Again, I run after if it is love for me.

 

How I have left from your city dejected

This is not migration but disaster for me.

 

The way the dejection always comes to me

As it is madly in love with me

 

I will not tell anybody

You love more than your god, me

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Comment by Rose Iris Will on August 10, 2018 at 18:40

We should not hang on words whether it is right to say that someone loves someone more than God does. We should not take it too literally. Always, poets have the poetry license and the right to exaggerate. As I am not religious at all, I do not have any problems with that. And for believers: the judging, you should leave it to God. I don't think he will be upset with Mishaiks words.
As for me, I loved the way how you describe the love, Miahaikh...as always.

Comment by dara gino on August 10, 2018 at 12:26

Main samajha kiya acha hain, Mr. Mishaikh! Allahu akbar, I love you and respect you very much. You are our head blogger and the kind and helping person for all the members here. In your heart, you have no grudging. I hope I become like you. Thanks, Mr. Mishaikh for explaining. 

Comment by Mishaikh on August 10, 2018 at 12:16

Oh Dara it is simply a POETIC EXAGGERATION, nothing else. The poet just want to say to his beloved that "I know you love me very much!"

Comment by dara gino on August 10, 2018 at 12:09

Wah kon hain, Mr. Mishaikh? To tell you the truth, I did not understand. We usually love our God the most. Here, I am confused about those verses up there. I am sorry, I could not get it. Thanks for sharing. 

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