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First love part 2

Sinta walked to her house, knocked the door and called her housemaid who had been like a family for her. She was called Mbok Demir or Mbok dem.

“Tok tok tok Mbok dem, I'm home, would you please open the door?” Sinta shouted

“wait, I'm on my way “ Mbok Dem replied.

“please, be quick. I am in the emergency moments.” Sinta said.

Sinta wanted to go to the toilet so badly. She kept shouting at Mbok Dem but Mbok Dem was still on her way to get to the door. She walked as fast as she could, and finally she reached the door. When she was infront of the door she realized that she forgot to bring the key. She shouted from inside” sinta, I forgot to bring the key, wait a couple of minutes”

“oh my Lord, really Mbok Dem. Please get it and open this door quickly. I can’t hold this anymore, I want to pee.” Sinta said

“ yeah, sure. I’ll get it as fast as I can , don’t worry “. Mbok Dem replied.

Mbok Dem ran into the living room and took the key out of the desk drawer. After that, she brought the key of the door and opened it. She was shocked by the water infront of the door. She asked sinta,”what is it?“

Sinta replied “water,”

“Yeah, I know that’s water But where is it from. Today is not raining “ Mbok Dem replied.

“Don’t ask Mbok Dem, that was your fault because you took a long time to open this door.” Sinta said. 

“I am really sorry Sinta, I didn't mean it.” Mbok dem apologized.

“ that’s okay Mbok Dem. So , I can’t walk through this door. I need to go to the back door. Would you like to open that door?” Shinta asked.

“Yeah, sure” Mbok Dem replied.

Sinta ran into the back door and tried to open it. It was unlocked,

“Oh,the door is unlocked” shinta is surprised.

She felt how stupid she was, because she didn’t run and tried to open that door when she was in that critical moment.

Mbok Dem saw that Sinta had been in and asked, “How could you get in?”

“I came in from the back door , it was unlocked.” Sinta replied.

“Oh , I see. Iam going to prepare your lunch.” Mbok Dem said.

“ Yeah, thanks a lot Mbok Dem, I appreciate that. “ Sinta replied and went to her room and took a shower.

She liked to sing  random songs when she was taking a shower. Someone Like You, is one of her favorite songs. She sang that song loudly “ Dont forget me, I begged ........”

Mbok Dem was in her way to get to shinta’s room to tell her that the food has already been served on the table. But she heard shinta said “ dont forget “. So she replied, “Yeah, I wont forget it."

‘’What? What are you talking about Mbok Dem? “Shinta said from the bathroom,

“I thought, you were talking to me .” Mbok Dem replied.

“Oh please Mbok Dem. I was not talking to you. I sang Adele’s song” Sinta replied.

“Adele? I don't know her. But it’s okay, I'm sorry so “ Mbok Dem said.

“Yapz, no problem Mbok Dem. What are you doing in my room ? “ Shinta replied.

“ I just want to say, your lunch has been served on the table “ Mbok dem replied.

“Okay , thanks Mbok Dem. I’ll be there in a few minutes. You can go back to work “ Sinta replied.

So, Mbok Dem went out and left Sinta.

A few minutes later , Sinta has finished taking her shower. She went out and checked her phone.

She was surprised by a text from an unknown number. She opened it and saw a message from Leo. He said”Hi ebrin. This is me leo. How are you doing? I have just attended a party. What are you doing? I just want to say, I cant wait to see you tomorrow “ . She  blushed and started to think where did leo get her number?.



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First Love

Hallo guys, i am going to post a story. I hope you guys can read it and leave your comment. This story has been checked by a kind man, mr.dara and here it is .

_First love_

Leonard was a good teenager, he had everything in his life, and many girls in his school loved him. He is a kind boy, everybody knows about it. But sometimes he can be an arrogant boy.
One day, in his classroom when the teacher was teaching, the headmaster came.
"Excuse me madam, take a new student", the headmaster said
"Yes, thanks for taking her into my class, sir ", the teacher said.
"No problem madam, it's okay. It's also my responsibility. So I leave her with you ", the headmaster said.
"Yes thanks again sir." Said the teacher.
"Yeah, no problem". The headmaster replied.
The headmaster went out of the class. The girl came into the class and the teacher asked her to introduce herself to the students in the class.
" Okay, now I give you time to introduce yourself ". Said the teacher
"Thanks mom", said the girl.
"Come on, don't waste our time girl", said the teacher.
"Okay my name is Sabrina Sintana, you can call me Sabri or Sinta or whatever that you want, but please don't call me with a bad name. I come from one village in the north of Indonesia...."
when that girl was introducing herself, Leonard Contradicted it.
"What!!! Village???" Leonard shouted.
"Yes of course, there is something wrong??" said Sabrina.
"No. I'm just surprised because you are, you are so beautiful, I can't believe it", Leonard said.
All of the students shouted. "hahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And the teacher said, "Okay, that's enough, you can sit in front of Leonard".
"Yes , thanks madam ", Sabrina said.

After that, the teacher started to teach again and all of the students gave their full attention to her.
###15 minutes later, the bell rang### the teacher went out of the class. The next teacher came and they started studying again. Five hours later, the last bell was ringing and all of the students started to take their stuff into their bags. The teacher went out and also the students.
Leonard called Sabrina "hey waitttttt!!!"
"Did you call me??" Sabrina asked.
"Yeah, I called you. I am Leonard you can call me Leo". Leonard said.
"Yeah, I know that, you can call me Sinta, nice to meet you ". Sinta replied.
"Nice to meet you Sinta, how about I call you with another name?" Leo asked.
"Yeah why not. What do you want to call me , but please don't call me with a bad name ", Sinta said.
"Yeah sure, I have thought before, and finally, I chose one name for you that's Ebrin "" Leo said.
"What. Ebrin?? What's that mean? Sinta asked.
"Nothing. It is just easy to remember you". Leo said.
" Ok I think it's not a bad name, and you can call me Ebrin from this time", Sabrina said.
" Awe, thanks a lot Ebrin, by the way, where do you live here?" Leo asked.
" I live near from our school; it's about 5 km from here" Sabrina replied.
"5 km? Turn right or turn left?" Leo asked.
"Turn right ", Sabrina replied.
"It's an amazing coincidence. We have the same way, maybe we can go home together by my car "Leo said.
"No Leo, thanks ", Sabrina said.
"Why?? I just want you to come home with me "Leo said.
"because I have just known you for a short time ", Sabrina said." you can trust me , I am not a bad boy, you can ask everybody here ". Leo asked.
"mmmm", Sabrina grumbled.
"Please, "Leo besought
" ok, I will come with you ", Sabrina said.
" thanks a lot Ebrin" Leo said.

And then Sabrina followed Leo and got into his car. Leo started his car and went away from their school .

Sabrina said, "Stop over here"
Leo asked "what happened?"
"That's my house, you see that?" Sabrina told Leo.
"Yeah. I see that ". Leo said.
"Ok thanks Leo ", Sabrina said.
"Yeah, you're welcome Ebrin", Leo said.

Sabrina tried to open the car door, but she couldn't open it. Leo asked her, "What are you doing Ebrin?
"I'm trying to open this door, but I can't", Sabrina said.
"No Ebrin, stay here, let me open the door, because I don't allow a girl to open my car door with her hand, it is against my rules, so let me open it", Leo told Sabrina.
"Yeah of course, come on open this door "Sabrina asked.

Leo went out of his car and opened the door, so Ebrin went out from Leo's car and Leo came back to his car.
He excused Sabrina,
"See you tomorrow my princess, I will miss you for one night glow", he said from his car
"see you Leo ", Sabrina replied.

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people say sharing is the good way to find out a solution of a problem. Right now, i want to try to write about a problem that has just come to me. i hope you guys can leave a comment and also correct my english if i make a mistake of grammar or other parts,

i want to know, what will you feel when you are losing someone that means in your life (a friend). You've already known your friend and thought that he or she is your best friend and more than that. someday, you realize that all of your thoughts about your friend are not going on the track.they are running to the opposite of your thoughts.

your friend wants to befriend just because she/he needs something from you,.befriend with you because she/he has something like a problem with her/his old friend. you are just the back up plan for him or her. what would you feel like ? feel a disappoinment or other feelings ?

that's what happening to me this time, i feel really disappointed about his attitudes, it so damn hurts . i dont know what i have to do to him, kick him or hit him or other.  it's so complicated for me.

do you have any suggestion to solve this problem ?

please comment 

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