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This is my writing according to data I was given. You guys please help me correct it, especially who is good at English or IELTS test. Thank you so much for taking your time to help me. Here is a topic: Untitled.png and my writing.

The data shows the sales of Coca-Cola in regions in 2000 such as North America, Latin  America, Europe, Asia, Africa and Middle East. In addition, the line graph illustrates the price of share from 1996 to 2001.

It is clear that the proportions of sales have the big difference, and the value of company on stock market also fluctuates over the time between 1996 and 2001.

In 2000, the percentage of sales in North America is the biggest volume, 30.4 %.  The second largest sales is in Latin America with 25.7%. The sales volume of Europe is less nearly 5% than Latin America. The Asia is the second lowest sales of Coca-Cola with 16.4 %. Africa and Middle East has the lowest sales in all regions is 7%.

The share price of Coca-Cola varies from 1996 to 2001. Between 1996 and 1998, the share increases sharply although it decreases a little bit in the year 1997.  After the middle of 1998 to 2001, the share fall rapidly although it increases shortly in 2000. 

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To day, I share with everyone a English learning method that I read on an article. The method named "TPR and listen first". TPR stands for total physical respond. The method suggest that we should learn English like our native language. This means that we listen to English first until we can understand native speaker well. Then, we learn to speak, read, and write. The period for listening often lasts 6 months or more. Some authors prove that this method is more powerful and effective than other traditional methods such as audio-lingual and grammar analysis. 

As all we know, Each one fixes with certain method. But, I hope that all of you will find a good thing in my writing. Here are some methods I have heard about it such as TPRS, ALG, The Efforless Way. You guys can search it on Google and try it. I hope that above information can help you guys. Don't forget to correct my writing if you can. Thank you for spending time reading my blog. Have a good night ! 

This is the second Christmas I take far from home. I remember the first time to have job at here  one year ago. 

I work in laboratory where test quality of materials and cement product. There are 6 people in my lab. Everyone has a different personality. Inital time, I can't stand the difference from them, especially the way the work. Overtime, I realize that I have to change. I need to accept the difference and adapt it. In theory, we all know but it isn't easy to do. Now, everything is better. The Chistmas day is coming. I wish all people having good health, happiness, peace, and success in lifetime.

P/s: In above paragragh, I confuse using " can't stand" or "couldn't stand" in order to be adequate to context. Please help me correct other mistakes if you spot in my writing. Thanks to you guys !

Hello everyone !

I have just read article has title: Disagreement Over Lower Mekong River Dam Project in Laos. 

Lao officals are discussing about plan to build dam for hydropower. But, lots of scientist, enviromental activists, foreign politician are concerned about enviroment effects. The dam will disrupt migratory fish and lead to greater water salinity and the washing way of soil. 

I hope that enviromental activists, scientists and politicians have right decisions to prevent  Mekong Delta' eco-system. 

P/s: I only write for practising English writing. My Writing skill isn't good. I  hope everyone who read my blog will correct it and give some advices to improve writing skill. Thanks all. Have a good night !