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How are you? I am Piseth. I am from Cambodia. Nice to see you.
Take your own time and just spend time for my essays apart from your day to day activities, my skype id is sureshkumar_odc.
Thanks,
Sureshkumar
Please don't say that I'm not prepared for exam[:(], because I've booked for the exam next month on Dec 19th. So I've to work more. Definitely I'll ask you questions. and from Dec onwards I'm going to post essay everyday.
Moreover, I'm going to follow a book called Cambridge Grammar for IELTS - Diana Hopkins with Pauline Cullen.
I think you and the book are going to help me out from my mistakes.
Thanks,
Sureshkumar
Thank you for accepting my request. Im pleased to be your friend.
Have a nice day.
Regards
Thanks, sure I will work on to reduce my mistakes those you have mentioned, and for your information the IELTS exam's maximum band is 9.
Can please point out some good websites or materials to practice sentence formation, gerund & number of nouns?. I've this problem continued for long time.
One more thing, as you are a westerner woman you can be independent but its not the same for our women, women here aren't bold and courage enough to meet new people. Even I feel sorry for them. :)
Soon, I'll post new essays with different approach.
Cheers,
Sureshkumar
A goal is an end or a result toward which an effort is directed. It is what you want to accomplish. It answers what you want to do.
Our goal is to get more low-income voters to participate in our general elections.
My goal this year is to get a better English vocabulary.
An aim is the reason, purpose or intent in doing something. It emphasizes why you want to do something.
Our aim in getting more low-income voters to vote is so they will be better represented.
My aim in getting a better English vocabulary is to communicate better.
A target specifies who or what receives the effort you exert. Or it specifically narrows down what you want to achieve.
Our target in our voting campaign is the low-income voters.
My target in getting a better English vocabulary this year is to learn 300 new words.
So in the sentence, “If one wants to achieve his target, one should work hard”, I would use “If one wants to achieve his goal, one should work hard”,
First of I would like to thank you for your correction. Then the essay topic and its content, I just written what I felt, that's all.
Please tell how much band would you give for my essay?
Regards,
Belajar